Ahh I would love to read more of this! Get busy writing, you! :D

I think it's very interested, beautifully wrote too. Please do more.

such an unique plot I feel this is very good please continue! Bella was wonderful characterized.

I am in awe, please continue!

wonderful, beautiful, superb, exquisite

I love Green Day.

awesome fic, i totally love this! please continue!

beautiful and interesting, please write more on this!! its wonderful so far!!

O_o

:o

i love viktor/hermy! please write more to this, its so great!

wonderful! please write more :D

excellent fic, you have a talent for words!

randomnes!! lol
super well written though!!

thanks for sharing

DF

superb!

this was so good, but i wouldn't expect anything less from you now. i loved the description and emotion and bella/viktor idea. please consider writing more!

omg you have to continue this, i have to see what happens next! awesome awesome fic