BravO!

What that was, was a wonderfully written story about Talim. lol Algol. I still loved him in Sophitia's ending when they totally bonded which I found so funny. I dunno why either. Anyways, there's actually nothing wrong with this in my view. I'll just say that I hated how Namco were trying to be grimdark and saying 'lol even soul calibur's kinda bad too hurr'.

I guess they are just inanimate objects with no real grip on human emotion and need, they're just out to get the other fecking sword.

again, wonderful stuff~.

This is a very GOOD story, I enjoyed reading it, and it was well-written. :) I loved how you showed Talim's true strength here, and her compassionate, but dutiful, nature. It felt like reading the end of a good story (well, it was Talim's ending; but it'd be nice if you wrote more of Talim, too). :)

~Pris

what is this? it's wonderful, for starters. :p Talim is one of my favorite characters and I loved her ending too.

reiterating an in-game event is a tricky thing to do, but i think you've done a great job in making an event readers have already seen into something unique and insightful. i especially like how strong and *mature* Talim's desire to help everyone is - even though she's young, her kindness isn't naive or wishy-washy. it's something she can lean on, something that makes her strong enough to do what she does.

thanks for sharing this!