Hey, nice take on a modern version of Crystal Chronicles. You have a knack for making your readers want to read more, particularly to have certain questions answered. Personally I'd like to know what happened to Amanda, and also how the filters were set up to begin with. I'm sure you'll answer these as time progresses.

You seem to have a formatting problem though. This entire chapter doesn't need to be bolded. Sometimes the website will mess it up when it uploads a chapter, so watch out for that next time.

Other than that, a great start and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Nice story, really good concept. Keep writing! Don't be like me and crap in the middle.
As for the dog...
Ick.