Awesome fic! ^^ I'm looking forward to Sierra's reaction to finding out the truth. please update soon. ^^

SIDESWIPE x3
You've just made my day.
And I love the way you write Jazz!

-CheshireMax

*Squeals* Sideswipe is here :D as you can guess I like him.

Anyway another good chapter I can see a similarity between Gabriel and Jazz (personality wise), which shows how good they work together and for the future. I'm very interested in Brianna's past but I'm afraid I haven't pick it up in this chapter but I like a good guessing game lol. I really like the mother and duaghter thing that's going on it's so sweet but at the same time you really want to have a go at swindle. Adam seems to be the odd ball here, it looks like that there is going to be trouble with them two working together which is good, it means that your keeping it realistic which is always welcomed in any story :)

So brill chapter and I'm really looking forward to reading the next one keep up the good work and I can say that I'm begining to get addicted ^-^

Swindle's a meanie-face D8<
But Jazz is cool so that makes everything better!
Good chapter, I like how elements of the story are unfolding, very unique!

-CheshireMax

Okay, just a quick note before I continue reading, I really like this fic thus far, the characters really jump out as being like people one would see on the street, so good on you.

One thing jumped out at me though: Dea didn't pay it much mind though, the doctor after all said she might be a little dazed and absent minded from being in a comma that long so she rode it off at that.

I think you mean "she wrote it off at that." Other then that, though, I haven't really seen anything.

o its moving along nicely :) I think Gabriel is going to be a really good character to watch and so is the relationship between Acree and Brianna I'm looking forward to another chapter. Oh and don't worry about the long wait everyone has a life outside fanfiction :D

Great chapter, I like how you introduced Bumblebee!

-CheshireMax

Hey :) very good I love the way that she uses the bots ** without knowing and the way Bee's memories are shared between the two very original. It's a subtle way to show the joining of the two 'sparks' that I find quite effective. So have a pat on the back :) and I'm looking forward to another chapter.

Wow a fresh take on the transformers stories good job. I'm looking forward to another chapter :)

Nice chapter, I like how you're incorporating the Cybertronian language into it. I'd be happy to beta for you, if you want.

-CheshireMax

This is an interesting idea, the first chapter is very well written. I don't think Sierra is a Mary-Sue, just be careful, some characters can turn into Mary-Sues over time.

Update soon!

-CheshireMax