THIS WAS SO... FUNNY!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
I CAN'T WAIT!
OH AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
~your patient reader

loved it¬!

good story!

love this chapter cant wait for them to hook up update soon please

post soon, PLEASE! (also, i would like my mini present please...*holds out hand for present, while other hand has a giant hammer in case you don't give it to my* please?!

Okay thay was kinda cute. can not wait for more!

Happy late birthday!

Ahh I wanted to read the camping part! Noo! Lol. Well done for building up to the main part though, that was very good. I really wanted an update, so I was so happy to read this! :)
I'm excited now, what's going to happen next I wonder...? hehe!

Continue with the way you're writing so far, keep building up and up the way you do, because it's really working. It builds tension. I love the characters and I like the way you changed the way Edward is-he's not like the real Edward in the Twilight books at all. I was surprised to find I like it! It's cool.
And Edward was funny here as well. I just loved the dialogue between B&E. Waiting for the next chapter! :D

Update now!! I can't wait!! lol. Thanks so much for writing this chapter. And I will always read and review when you update, I promise.

This has got to be one of the funniest stories I've read about Bella and Edward! It's so much fun having them hate each other. I can't wait to see what happens at the camp.

Update soon!

this is interesting! realyy good

WO! More Bella & Edward feuding! This should get sparky! xP

- Jennifer x

awesome story

Hey, I love it! You did really well making Edward such an ass, lolz. It's awesome and I hope you update soon!

Luv,

Locketful o' Heartache

P.S. I don't think you're old until you make it to a century, lolz. =D

I like the idea of Bella and Edward hating each other in this story - it makes a cool change! I also like that you added some vulnerability to your Edward, instead of him appearing to just be nasty for no reason. Plus, B&E secretly like each other... I wanted that to happen. The bickering was very funny, so I really enjoyed it.
I loved both chapters and I can't wait for more updates!

funny and actually cute how they argue.
caww