This was beautiful and going on my real favorites list (it kinda spilled over onto my bio...)

*****Nestrik

This is a good story, but I'm a little confused about the ending. Are you saying that Evelyn eventually married Rafe out of convenience, rather than love? And that she really loved Danny? Or vice-versa?

This is really, really, really good. I look forward for future chapters, hint hint. But really I think you've been doing a great job with this story so far.

That was incredible! Very well done. It could almost be a prequel to my story "To be a Father." Very well written!