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drasticbarbie
2009-11-11 . chapter 30
very nice.
Tatarata
2009-11-01 . chapter 3
This is my very first Alice/Jasper story. I really like how you describe them.
Cat
2009-10-31 . chapter 43
Pretty much the best fanfiction I have ever read. Ever.
anna_kouklitsa
2009-10-30 . chapter 43
I LOVE MY JASPER!
lilmrsflowers
2009-10-30 . chapter 43
I just wanted to say that I adored your novel. I thought it was fantastic. Every moment I had free, I spent it reading this. I can most defiantly see this as a book that came first in the Twilight Series. I loved it so much. It had a perfect amount of humour, love, sadness, passion as anything I have ever read! Thank you so much for thinking of this story and sharing it for us all to read!
hoopla92
2009-10-17 . chapter 43
this was so amazing
i loved the ending <3
sora kinomoto
2009-10-17 . chapter 43
I've just finished reading it... and I absolutely adore it!! It has become one of my favourites fics ever... I'm actually kind of sad because I finished it (I've been actually obsessed with this fic for 3 days, I even went to sleep really late because I needed to continue reading it =P). I most probably will reread it a million times, so thanks for giving us Jasper and Alice's fans such a great fic, it had all that I've been wanting to read, and your writing skills are just great.

Thanks!
LittleMissCullen123
2009-10-15 . chapter 43
I love this story so much whenever i read another alice and jasper fic most of the time i end up changing it in my mind so that it ties in with this story i feel as if this is the true story of alice and jasper before twilight came .
twificfan
2009-10-13 . chapter 5
I am enjoying your story. I really love Alice and Jasper and I like the way that you are portraying their history together. I can really feel the "spark" between them!

I am curious as to the year that this piece takes place. I have the impression that it is in the 40's? Although it was a popular vacation destination, casinos didn't exist in Atlantic City until 1977. My family went to Atlantic City every summer and I remember being a teen when gambling was made legal there. My father's cousin, who lived there, got a job as a croupier in one of the first casinos that opened. Just a bit of trivia for you.
ShioriOreo
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
I love how you actually finished this story, I just now found it and it's amazing, I've been reading it for the past couple of days and I love it completely! Right now I can't think of another story that would be before Twilight for Alice and Jasper.

You really did a great job and I really felt all of the emotion for everything that you wanted to put across in the story.

Well done.

-Shiorio
regina
2009-10-12 . chapter 43
INCREDIBLE!
will there be a sequel?
kt.potter93
2009-10-04 . chapter 43
aw, sweet end :)
bamcneal831
2009-09-27 . chapter 43
LOVED IT!
mialuvtwilight
2009-09-27 . chapter 43
i really loved the insight to their lives and i consider this their actual life before the culens, i loved it!
mialuvtwilight
2009-09-27 . chapter 42
aw i loved the extra vows they put in there it was so sweet!
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