I think I'm going to cry. When Jasper said that he couldn't live without Alice, and that he wouldn't -it made me think of A Long Time Waiting. So sad!

Love this story though (and that one), thank you for the frequent re-posting! I really appreciate it!

-Auphora66

another beautiful chapter :)

I have just one thing to say.

YOU ARE A FREAKIN' AWESOME AUTHOR!

Great chapter, I loved it.

Oh man, I read this one a while back and, lemme tell you, it kept me awake into the wee hours of the morning, and then a few not-so-wee hours after that. I think once, around 3am, I tried to sleep. But NO, I HAD to know what was going to happen. Finishing reading the whole thing became Very Serious Business.

So that day, I ended up going to bed at 10 am the next morning. Thanks to this ferocious beast of a story and I am SO GLAD IT'S HERE AGAIN. I think this might be My Favourite Fic Ever!TM. [And written infinitely better than the Twilight series. SO infinitely.]

aw, poor alice :(

but at least she had the self-control not 2 kill the baby

nice chapter :)

Fuckin rocksz likee allwayszz. . . .updatee fastt!

aw

it' really good because bythe approaches to the humans is how they manage to learn in this wonderful magical loonie world haha

good chapter and good new friend she needs one other than Jazz

see ya

anna alice

I really like it. Alice is by far my fave Cullen. I hope you update soon!

They shouldn't have changed their first names. THings would be less complicated if they hadn't. Alice handled that well. Marlene seems like a good friend to have. Great chapter, please update soon!

I'm amazed at how well you are able to express their feelings. I'm amazed that I can feel for them as the story goes on. You are a wonderful writer, and I absolutely love this story. Please, keep writing, as you are one of the better authors i have read.

O,Jasper and Alice really love

each other. Now he is helping

her to have control.

Good writing.

I read this story a while back and although I only liked the first book of the "Twilight" series, I fell in love with this story, and I'm happy to have found it again. Jasper and Alice are my favourite characters from the book and this just makes me adore them even more so.

All in all, a wonderful story and feels very canon to the series.

I love this story so much!

Thanks for posting this!

I laughed at Jasper's grave sin.

-Auphora66

This is such a wonderful begining! This story is won a ton of awards and so I've been DYING to read it, and so I hope you update quickly!