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Tagrea
2009-11-20 . chapter 17
Loved it
azab
2009-11-11 . chapter 17
loved it good job :> update soon
azab
2009-11-11 . chapter 15
good chapter update soon :>
Tisha Wyman
2009-10-24 . chapter 17
Dang it. Is there more?
Tisha Wyman
2009-10-24 . chapter 16
Are we getting this story? It's beena while since I've been on. Had some major RL issues. How are you?
NovembersAsh
2009-10-12 . chapter 17
I really like your story and I hope you update soon. Its a hassle to go to livejournal if you don't have an account! :) The story is cute and funny! Andy is a great personality and I kind of like that he doesn't fit in! Anyway Happy writing!
emmettcullenislove
2009-08-31 . chapter 17
heyy love your story to bits just wondering when your going to update
anonfan
2009-08-29 . chapter 17
Aww, I'm sad to see this story end. I really liked it! Well done
emmettcullenislove
2009-08-20 . chapter 17
please update soon i cant wait to read chapter 16 and the rest of the story
Tisha Wyman
2009-08-16 . chapter 15
This chapter was so good. I like the fact that Dean and Adam were able to actually talk and that Adam was able to share what he was feeling with Dean. When Dean found out that Adam had been in his head he didn't get angry and it would have been so typical of Dean to do so. I really loved the fact that Dean is trying so hard not to scare Adam. He really wants to be the big brother and it is so nice to see this side of Dean. He usually has more concern than Sam will show sometimes. I really liked this. When's the next chapter?
Tisha Wyman
2009-08-16 . chapter 14
I know I am ages behind. RL has been playing havoc and I a now playing catch up. It's a great episode. I am glad that is recognizing the jealousy problem with Sam. It can become a handful for him if he's not careful.
Catalina Day
2009-08-13 . chapter 15
Let me just take a moment to tell you how much I love this story. This story is freaking amazing.

I've been wanting to read a fic where Adam joined the team, and I do believe this is the first one I've found.

Everyone's so in character, and the mixture of slight angsty-ness and humor is just about perfect. Well done, and I can't wait to read more.
emmettcullenislove
2009-08-06 . chapter 15
omg i love you story please update it soon i have been waiting for a story like this ever since they killed Adam off cause i wanted him to be in the show and your story is so well written please please please update
keekers15
2009-07-30 . chapter 15
hahaha omg, love the end. interesting twist with adam's powers, update soon!
jensenluv
2009-07-30 . chapter 15
haha, i just scared my sleeping cat i laughed so hard at that last paragraph! that was complete and amazing genius! :] like, geniusier than albert einstein (and yes. genius can be used as an adjective!) ;)
I love this chapter. i really actually think it's my favorite one ever. im glad to see the beginings of brotherly bonding that goes both ways for dean and adam. and i love the protectiveness and nurturing feelings that adam finds in dean. you really know how to keep the characters real. i mean, the whole scene with dean flinching and telling adam not to be a good little soldier--that was just so touching and heartbreaking. you're such an amazing author to be able to manipulate the reader's feelings like that. so thank you for that.
i can't wait for the next chapter!
<3
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