I liked this one shot a lot! Especially how it was from Zuko's POV. Nice ending!

Very Cute!! A nice innocent yet fluffy Toko love :3!

Sweet a great toph and zuko moment.
Now where are these cookies u promised?

I really enjoyed reading this. Usually, I'm not too fond of things written in first person because I find them lacking in substance, but this was beautifully done.

I'm not sure if I wasn't reading thoroughly enough, but I didn't quite understand his thoughts about saving Katara. Also, I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad. I suggest a quick look over it if you have the time to correct what little mistakes there are.

However, I believe you kept it very much in character. It was an interesting view of Zuko's thoughts; something I haven't read before, but not something that seemed unlikely. I really adore how you portrayed him. I also loved the slight Toko added in at the end, heh.

Overall, this was excellent. Fantastic job!

And I’ll take the virtual cookies, please. ;D

ZeldaChao19 x