I love how you added Nine's 'fantastic' to the end of the piece. He said it the best.

I quite liked it! I wasn't fond of it being in a second person narrative, and the bold script bookending it was a little distracting, but the writing was very clear and concise. I especially liked the part about when they hold hands and run :)

Loved it. Fantastic work :)

-Maggie

*chucks tomatoes at WeepingAngel123* THAT'S what you get for being so good! :) Great job!

absolutly beautiful :) make tears in my eyes lol

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Lovely story. Tomatoes are good, throwing them would bruise them. Balsamic vinaigrette on cherry tomatoes, yum.