lool i really like the way it all turned out, it's just alil'bit OC but it's really nice like this, keep the same style, and just don't stop writting :P
I can't wait for the next chapter ;P

You MUST write more! I like the OC character! she's so cute!

KYAA!! =D Yuya confessed! yay! LOL I loved when Okuni got jealous...Kyo was totally like 'in your face! Yuya's my woman!' anyway this chappie was really romantic ^^ I love it please update soon.

*swoon* Yukimura is my favorite character! When I first saw the anime, he reminded me of Fai from Tsubasa Chronicles(whom I love as well!), but he is is own character completely, which makes me like him even more! Please write another chapter!