Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: A Lucky Dose - Page 1 of 2
Tofu-Master
2009-08-21 . chapter 6
Wow...jus' wow. xD

I remember readin' this quite a while back, but i dun think i reviewed. Now, readin' it again was quite nostalgic, an' i remember jus' why i love yer fics in the first place: they're bloody brilliant. Though, the same can obviously be said fer the esteemed author. ^^

Man...i lol SO effin' hard every time i read this. Every. Bloody. Time.

But now, i'm jus' wonderin'...DID yer teacher ever end up lookin' those lovely words up? Ta yer knowledge, anyhow.
xD

One question though...what i'm gittin' from this, is tha' Tyki is really OUR Tyki-pon's great-great-grandson, an' each generation's been lookin' fer Lavi(who's somehow still alive...) all this time. Is tha' correct?
Flattered By Mockery
2009-05-23 . chapter 6
Oh, I get it!! :D This was such an awesome fic. And... awh, the last line. Portuguese is officially my favourite language in the whole wide world, because it's so dang sexy. ;w;
This is such a cute story. Thanks for posting it. ^^
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-05-23 . chapter 6
XD ahaha, i just imagined lavi dressed up as a grandmother with grey haired wig in a bun (with his real hair sticking out of it in spots) and sitting in a rocking chair knitting.

it was /adorable/. X3

as was the whole of this chapter. 8D that was a lovely way to end it~.
~Pizzazz
glon morski
2009-05-23 . chapter 6
Hey hey hey, finished already? Aw man. But still, good work XD I'll have to dig up some of your other writings :D
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-05-23 . chapter 5
mahaha, "Cause I'm totally the best person to stalk?" of course that's why, Tyki-pon! you couldn't have not already known that. ^^ or perhaps he just wanted to hear more of Lavi's lovely voice talking to him. ...i wouldn't put something like that past Tyki, after all. but anyways, i am grateful to Mr. Fitz for giving you such a wonderful excuse to write us moar Lucky. 8D
~Pizzazz
glon morski
2009-05-23 . chapter 5
interesting. I was sort of confused at the beginning but as I continued to read I understood it XD Will there be a next chapter? I hope there will, 'caue the story is freaking awesome XD
Flattered By Mockery
2009-05-22 . chapter 5
So wait... Tyki was looking for Lavi the whole time? And his great-great grandfather couldn't? Or are we talking different rabbits, here? xD;
I liked the extended Lucky fluff here- it was really cute. :3 Thanks for this chapter.
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-05-21 . chapter 4
XD aha, Road brought Lero along. tyki may find her irritating, but i think it's cute.

they really need to realize that since they've been meeting up in so many random places that it's /obvious/ they should be together more. if lavi's jelly legs aren't enough sign...
~Pizzazz
bunny-tash
2009-05-21 . chapter 4
:3
LOVE!
Flattered By Mockery
2009-05-21 . chapter 4
Awh, he felt like jelly... >w< That's so cute.
This is another good story! I like how they're all continuations from the previous- that's very nice!
Thank you for this chapter.
Flattered By Mockery
2009-05-20 . chapter 3
Ah, what a coincidence! :D I liked the way you portrayed Rhode, that was good. And the whole sequel-part to Chapter Two was nice, as well. I liked this one. ^^
And. Lavi blushing was amazing. ;w;
artemis89
2009-05-20 . chapter 3
sorry for reviewing only now at the third chap. this is a very wonderful fic. i just understand one minute ago that all those 'dose' are linked together. i know i'm a little stupid sometimes...
anyway i can't wait for the next. great idea the one with the assignement (why when i was at school i never did it? T.T) and you're updating everyday, it's fantastic!
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-05-20 . chapter 3
XD mahaha, sending glances across at each other... i love how lavi's trying to pretend like he didn't care about that. ^^ but the blushing proved tyki got under his skin~.

another nice dose of lucky. :3
~Pizzazz
bunny-tash
2009-05-19 . chapter 2
why i hadn't notice these before i don't know XD LOL

lol hulk hoga
wicked as always C|: D the hat man admires you XD
bunny-tash
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
awsomness. sad yet awsomness
really good
we never do a fantasy write in school. it's just how to stucture sentences and all that but i am in bottom set so i don't complain.

'claps' :3
Return to Top