Oh. Mah. Gawd. Ya'll.

Dude. Melny and Shane are so beautiful I want to cry. And they're not even romantically involved. Yet, they are so f'n beautiful. Shane is so sweet, I want to barf, but I can't, cause he's too great! *sigh* Why can't we all have bffs like him?

And the flashback...man, that was heartbreaking! I can't believe Christian would just leave her like that! I understand time apart and all but damn, did he have to leave the country? XD I guess I can kind of understan, but then I see Shane and I'm thinking "back away, Christian, you gots some competition!"

And friendship is great and uncomplicated but...is it wrong I'm rooting for SHane and Mel to get together? OMG I'M HORRIBLE! *hides in shame* I love this. I mean, omg dude!

O_O

You make me wanna write about wee beh-behs...XD XD!

No seriously, I sometimes wonder how you take a tiny meager prompt and turn it all "KABLAMMO"!! This is already playing out like a soap opera, but in all the right ways. I like that Mel is a publicist who used to be a diva--I dunno why, but when they're not a diva it just seems to make it more interesting, XD!! I'm already in love with this story. When does Christian come in? Is he gonna see Elle and know it's his right away? WHERE IS GREGORY HELMS AT?!?! Is Edge gonna go all psychosocial and blackmail Melony?? That would be SO like him! And the end of the chapter had to be my favorite part;

Before she could brush past the tall Canadian, he reached out and gently grabbed her arm. "Mel, if the offer is right he's coming back. He misses you, you know. He never got over you either."

Edge dropped her arm and waited for her to leave. Nevertheless, she stood planted before him her eyes downcast. "I miss him too." She whispered before turning and practically running out of the building.

THat was like, so perfect! I know you have about fifteen more chapters hoarded up in there you hoarder!! Will one more kill you?? Huh? HUH?!