Hey! Did you know your story was listed as Best of the Best on the twiawards? Where are the updates? Are you updating on another site?

THIS IS A RELLY GOOD STORY PLEASE KEEP WRITING

I love it! update soon!

I still love it! even if it was short! and if anyone tries telling you different! you just write! JOG ON!

Excuse my bluntness, but this is bullcrap. There are spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors left and right. The paragraphs consist of one person speaking and 'she said' or 'he said.' Everything, for some reason, is bolded.

I honestly can't understand why you would publish however manny chapters of this bullshit, or why anyone would review it.

Clara Fonteyn

excellent

FINALLY! ive been waiting forever for an update! i didnt know if bella died but finally i know now shes gonna be a vamp! please update again, this time alot sooner! i understand writers block (i get that all the time), busy schedules and malfunctioning laptops but please, i gotta know what happens next in this story! please update asap!

Yew Better Update Soon.

(insert laugh)

I'm Sorry You're Computer Ish Demented,

Mine Ish Twoo.

But Good Chapter Overall.

omg this is so god! i cant wait for the next chapter! i love it!

i love it plz wright more

HIS NAME IS HARRY! COME ON GET YOUR FACTS RIGHT!

OMG this is such a good story! i hope that edward and bella get back togeather :)

Update soon!

-Alison

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hey!

i just wanted to make sure you know you are a very talented writer. You describe the characters and the scenes so well i can see it all in my head, perfectly. This story is absolutley amazing, and i couldnt stop reading until i read all of what you had posted. I can not wait until you post more so i can continue reading to see what will happen next! PLEASE CONTINUE or im gonna be really upset!

-titanterror12

good job. you have come a long way. i still think its a little bit choppy, its like, she balied charlie out, she made him supper, she fell. i think you should put more description into what they are doing, and put how they are feeling at that moment, take longer sentences. anywho, just a little helpfull critisism. i'm sorryu if i offended you. you did a good job.

realy a danger magnet