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sunakolllx
2009-10-16 . chapter 20
omygosh! story was so freakin' awesome! T~T really liked it!
The Nightstress
2009-10-06 . chapter 20
._. This instantly goes on my Top 10 Fanfics of all time list. Q.Q It was so amazing. I'm gonna cry now that I have finished reading this. (...Goes back and re-reads it) This was seriously great though >w< I don't know what else to say. It truly blew me away.
StoryTagger
2009-09-06 . chapter 20
Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, but I really wanted to finish the story in one go. Anyways, this whole story was truly amazing. The way you kept the story to it's near original and yet created a separate story line was awesome; and that epilogue, I swear it reminds me of this movie "What Dreams May Come". Great movie, and great story...but one quick question before I go, where did you come up for the names at the very end...ehehe, never mind I just figured it out...Hehe, I'm rather dense apparently...hehe
Strange and Intoxicating -rsa-
2009-07-31 . chapter 20
I resisted for a few days, hoping that a magical update would pop into my email box and tell me that the story wasn't actually done, that the link waiting for me to click was the last one...

And so I sight and clicked, and began to tear up as I read through it. That was, until I could all but hear Tidus and Auron rolling their eyes at me (I swear, you an hear it!) and tell me to suck it up. Afterall, I wasn't the one dying.

I liked the ending, and caught on to the names the minute you named Bel backwards. I was like "Whut--oh."

Anyway, excellent story, and I hope to see more of you (and this pairing. :P)

Thank you so very much,
Sai
Sen2TOS9
2009-07-29 . chapter 20
I love this fanfic so much. The ending was amazing and I'm so happy you didn't end it with Tidus and Auron dying. It would be interesting to know how their rebirth lives went though... but seriously this was so awesome.
Svarra
2009-07-29 . chapter 20
I was fine with the epilogue, though the names were awkward, I understand why you did it, so we would know who everyone is. My only issue is that you didn't have Thcej as the Dad, though that's an even more awkward name. Maybe Th'cej?
PassionX
2009-07-29 . chapter 20
It's over! =]
Congrats on a great story, and a great read.
Green of Four Swords
2009-07-28 . chapter 20
Wow, I just plowed through like 5 or 6 chapters at once! You're amazing! This is like chapter book quality! I've come to like the ending, Tidus became Sudit! Auron Norua and Belgemine, um Enimegleb? and Akka and Attag, I cracked up at that one. Wow, very original names *wink*
I think tears came to my eyes as I read the last chapter... Tidus' explanation to the others is a bit better than the one he gave in the game but... it's just so sad...Loved your story, really really loved it! Just everything, it's so well-rounded and closes the pilgrimage. I just hope that all of Spira will know what Tidus did for them. Giving them happiness and a chance at life is the best gift of all (but a part of me want them to recognize who it is that gave them that, call it my love for Tidus and eagerness to see him recognized for his deeds :D)
Oh wow, this is the end... It's been so much fun (Kelk and Kinoc survive! You are awesome and you've created a phenomenal piece. FF10 4EVER!
I don't know what else to say but... thank you for bringing such an amazing story to FFX fanfiction :)
Rin'negan Naruto
2009-07-28 . chapter 20
this is a awesome story,

it sad that it have to end so fast, but every good thing must come to end sooner or later, but i rater it later.

please write more final fantasy story, ready looking forward to a new story.
Strange and Intoxicating -rsa-
2009-07-27 . chapter 19
This was a nice chapter, gives Tidusa bit of closure. I'm kind of sad that it's all going to end soon... I was expecting more, dang it! However, I can't take that out on you.

The sex scene... I don't think it could have gone any other way considering how those two act. Sure, it would have been nice to get an actual detailed account of smuttyness of awesome, but at the same time... It was nice. :3

*cries a little* Poor guys.
Rin'negan Naruto
2009-07-27 . chapter 19
i love it so much,

it sad seeing Tidus saying goodbye to he friends in silence, while they don't know he not coming back even if they beat sin. Poor Tidus.
Svenka
2009-07-24 . chapter 16
More is good! If you talk to Maechen after going to Zanarkand and before Bevelle, a lot of Yunalesca's motivations are revealed. He talks about how Bevelle's armies marched upon Zanarkand and then disappeared, killed, scouts later found the huge amount of Fayth and then Sin appeared. Yunalesca went with Zaon to kill Sin, not for any altruistic reason, but to start up the religion of Yevon as a sort of ultimate revenge against Bevelle, having her father, the leader of Zanarkand and the destroyer of Bevelle's army, attain a sort of immortality in the religion and be worshipped by them.

He also says how the Hymn of the Fayth was originally a song people sang in protest of Yevon, specifically sung by the Al Bhed, and the religion adopted it in order to quell the rebellion. It's a pretty interesting speech, but few people hear it because they don't think to go back to Gagazet or have the patience to listen to his long winded talks.
Rin'negan Naruto
2009-07-24 . chapter 16
awesome fast update, love it.
Ranchdressing
2009-07-24 . chapter 15
Oh my. Now that I think about it, during the 3rd Seymour battle, he mostly went after Tidus. I wonder why...? (lol)

But hopefully Tidus' story doesn't end here.
slivershell
2009-07-23 . chapter 15
ONE CHAPTER EVERYDAY!!? I LOVE YOU!! I can't believe Tidus confessed his love for Auron in front of freakin' Seymour. Is he insane? That battle with Seymour was long. His bid huge attack always killed me! And I had shells and protects, so they did nothing for me. I had to prevent his attack by summoning so he'll use his turn to banish the aeon and not slaughter my party.

I had a felling that Yuna and Tidus would go to Zanarkand together! And they might fight lady Yunalesca together! And I see Tidus' reaction to Auron being an unsent, if he finds out. He'll punch him again and run off. And then cry. Aw... Can't wait for that! See you tomarrow!!
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