Wow I loved this story!

It was SUPER entertaining. I like Phoebe and Leon as Ash & Misty's kids, too. I've looked at other fics with Ash & Misty's kids, but they usually ended up being too annoying. But I really loved these characters -

I think it would be cool if you did a few other little stories with Phoebe and Leon. I'd definitely read them :)

anyway, good job :D

What. I want real cookies :(

... Oh fine. Thanks for giving me false hope.

Actually, I don't care. The next chapter may be more rewarding than cookies :)

This is a really entertaining story. I usually never read fics that aren't romantic, but since I like your stories, I thought I'd give this one a shot. And I'm very happy I did :D

Now.. on to chapter 2!

lol *laughs*

i cant believe silly lil' leon... *shakes head* what an idiot...

OMG LOL! I JUST HAD AN IDEA!

it's kinda random and i'm not sure where it came from, but i think you should write another fanfic where either leon or pheobe is the main character, and then i can add my own character and pokemon and we can write a fanfic together *laughs*

lol... i get some crazy ideas sometimes... eh heh...

we could make up our own crazy team rocket team and everything... and our own motto! *laughs like hell*

WO! TIME PARADOX!

This is awesome, can't wait for more!

Hehe love the ending, leave it for little leon to spill the bean haha. Anyway great job with the story and thank you for doing such a great work with my idea. Have a great summer and I'll talk to you later

And yeah I need to update my story too :)

“Yeah! That's the way Team Rocket's does it, an' that's the way we's always gonna do it!” Meowth seconded.

“And that's the perfect segue for what we're going to do next.”

HAH! FOUND IT! FOUND IT! OH MAN AND WAS I CRACKING UP! WAHAHAHAHHAA!

LOL so I LOVED the ending! ROFL Misty...hate to think how she'll punish them...well the mallet make a comeback perhaps? P The battle was awesome, and Team Rocket were as ridiculous and hilarious as ever! This was an awesome story! You pulled off the whole time travel thing MARVELOUSLY (not that I had any doubt you wouldn't :D)! AMAZING job, my friend! I loved it! xD

I hope you don't go all Back to the Future on us. Good story!

Uwah! I'm sorry! I'm a meanie-head and took forever to review! -_-; But yes this was a great start! Aw Leon is so cute! Typical annoying little brother, but cute! And I like Phoebe's thinking! Any other fic would probably have the kids go up and interact with Misty and Ash...and that would be extremely...awkward... _ lol! I know we talked about the plot of this earlier! I'm really excited to see how you end it! NO PUEDO ESPERAR! Muy bien trabajo, mi amiga! Y ahora tengo que escribir MI nueva cuenta! Hasta luego! xD

hahaha

get on with is woman!

like before...

YOU MUST UPDATTE!

hahahahaha

yeah, like i've said

update. thats all i have to say. i'll shower you with compliments when the next/final chapter's up, kay?

hahahaha

Okay, now while I normally tend to dislike stories about a canon couple's children emerging from the future to get their parents together, this one really seems to work. Why?

a) You outlined specific details about how they got there from the future without saying too much.

b) You provided an actual plot and conflict, one that provides story development and characterization.

c) You didn't make Phoebe and Leon clones of their parents like EVERYONE ELSE would have done. Not only that, but you provided well-thought-out personalities for them both and you had their dialogue make sense with their respective ages.

d) These kids are smart enough not to go screwing around with the past versions of their parents without a VERY GOOD REASON. Also, you made Leon, the younger of the two, try to talk to the past Misty (like any nine-year-old would try to do) until he is reminded by Phoebe that it could have deadly consequences on the future.

And another thing about that! There is a very good reason why most of those future kids stories never get finished. It's because once the parents meet the kids from the future, the author probably doesn't know what to do because of how AWKWARD the situation is! I doubt anyone is going to be hooking up with anyone under THOSE circumstances! Love develops naturally, over time and patience and understanding...

Which is why it is very fitting to have Celebii as this fic's mascot. Yayness! I hope you update this story because it's really good and I want to find out what that mysterious floating green blob is. I doubt that it's Rayquaza or anything. Perhaps another meddler from the future?

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Hey great job this you took my idea to whole new level. Good work!

Oh and I love how much the kids are like their parents.

:)

Hmm...

So who is trying to steal the bike?