 BlueStar123 2009-11-09 . chapter 3Canada will never willingly become one with Russia!
[But as much as I shouldn't, the Ivan/Matthew scene...ufufufufu...]
Alred/Matthew definitely for the epilogue please. Can't wait! |
 Yu-SuNago 2009-09-14 . chapter 3MORE. and by more i mean more SMEXING >:'D |
 hyourintenshi 2009-08-05 . chapter 3 I-is it too late to request for the epilogue? Because HOT DAMN. Your story is a REAL treat to read~ |
 Em-Em-lop 2009-07-21 . chapter 3wonderful, please right an alfred/matthew epilogue. I loved Ivan he was deffinatly in character. :) |
 Miki~ 2009-06-18 . chapter 3 Oh. My. GAWD. That was friggen amazing. Very well written story <3. And I'm really glad you decided to not be mean. AlfredxMatthew is one of my favorite pairings and that would've been really horrible T^T. And, yes please write an epilogue~ More of sweet, cute lil Matthew and his protective big brother ^_~ |
 Hawk Stout 2009-06-06 . chapter 3EPI(C)LOGUE I DEMAND IT!
Despite Francis' wound you just know he's more annoyed about his hair than the stitches...
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yay! (confetti for you) |
 xxXTheXFallenXxx 2009-06-03 . chapter 3Epilogue please! |
 Shiki-Channer 2009-06-02 . chapter 3OH GOD, I LOVED THIS FIC TO DEATH. You did such a good job with the characterization and plotting throughout it all, really well done.
Also, the Russia/Canada scene...oh god I guess I should feel guilty but fapfapfapfapfap.
I can't wait for the prologue! |
 Sangiku 2009-06-02 . chapter 3 zomg bloody love it spectacular fic mate
and so totally do want usXcanada epilogue
would totally love you forever |
 Hawk Stout 2009-06-01 . chapter 2hurray! Update! Have an invisible internet cookie! now hurry up for the NEXT update
pretty please |
 Integration 2009-05-29 . chapter 2Getting exciting already I see :).
I think what I like about this is that it lacks the inner conflict alot of other assassin fictions contain. It is a way of life for them and I really like it. Or I just hate too much angst either way thumbs up!
Anyway thank you for sharing :) |
 Integration 2009-05-29 . chapter 1I really like the look of this and I am about to read chapter two but I just wanted to point out that it's mon enfant. Mes enfant(s) would be plural :).
Really good chapter though and Matthew can still be cute despite being an assassin. It's good to know.
Thank you for sharing :) |
 bitter green tea 2009-05-27 . chapter 2Hooray for update! :D This chapter pretty much made my night and what a way to leave cliff hangers! A part of me wish that someone will barge in and save Matt but the *other* part of me wants to see Giovanni (the scumbag) have his way. (I'm a horrible patriot. I'm sorry Matthew! XDD)
And you included more violence in this fic! It never even occured to me how potentially *awesome* the America/Canada/Austria/Germany group is. Kinda makes me wonder what other potential crazy pairings you've manage to concoct next.
You also included my other OTP Romano and Antonio. I hope they get to make more of an appearance <3 |
 Shiki-Channer 2009-05-21 . chapter 1I LOVE THIS EPIC FIC IN TOO MANY WAYS TO COUNT. (But I will try, nonetheless.)
The characterization and dialogue in this fanfic are absolutely top-notch, particularly with Francis and Arthur, but all of it is very good. This fanfic has also reminded me of why AU's can be insanely great when pulled off properly. The characters situations seem realistic to their personalities, and I've always thought that the Hetalia characters would make a great spy-assassin type cast. (Especially Canada actually. He's so quiet, blends in easily but inwardly strong; He'd make an awesome killer.)
Like I said, this fic is awesome, but occasionally you've got a few spelling errors on really simple words. (Family=Famimy?) Your grammar is great, but you might want to spent a few moments putting the fic through a spellchecker.
Anyhow, I love this fic. And to top it all off in awesome-ness, you have my OTP Russia/Canada in it. I LOVE YOU <3 <3 <3 |
 kagami714 2009-05-21 . chapter 1Canada's an assassin? Makes sense.
This is a great idea for an AU. I like the atmosphere this story has, and you include lots of great details that really set the dark, suspense sort of mood.
I love your Alfred. He's creepier than usual, but still America, and his interaction with Matthew is funny. Your characterization of Matthew is spot on. I'm excited to see the next part. |