Thanks for clarifying that it wasn't a deathfic. :) Nice job with the suspense in this one.

Somehow I get the impression you have a slightly different conception of "not a deathfic" than me. *bites fist and goes sobbing into her pillow*

Sam's belief that Dean was merely teasing him fit very well with his threat of killing his older brother, should that be the case.

LOl, well it's either you tricked up into reading it, or there's more. I would like to see more, because if it's not a death fic, then I'm very curious to find out what his happening.

Umm well it seems like a deathfic...you sure its not? bev x

*Cries and cries and CRIES*

Hi, No, not a death fic because you wouldn't kill Dean, would you!
Poor Sammy, after expecting his big brother to be goofing around, waiting to jump out at him and scare him he finds something that more than scares him...a lifeless Dean.

I like this and would love to read a full fic on this. x

Of course he isn't... it's probably only a soul sucking monster who has taken his life force... Sam will find it and get it back long before he starts to smell... Right?

Nope - can't be a death fic but I could see a whole story rising up from this drabble. Who pulled up the sheet? Why are his eyes stark white? Why so blue? Is he breathing?

Such a short piece of writing yet so much in there - great!

Geez! I hope not! What are you doing to us? There better be a follow-up! Please?

well damn that was sad

not a death!fic? ha-ha-ha now you MUST continue and explain yourself ;) please?

*screams* What? Dean...? *wibbles lip* No!

He died. It's a death fic.

This is good, but I would have thrown in a couple of words to say that a hunt went bad, something killed him, some explanation...

Anway, I liked it.

WHAT? What happened to "not a death!fic"? That's TOTALLY a deathfic. LOL Oh, Dean! *wails*

Well, it's angst filled, which is what I love, so great job, makes me feel horrid and worried...and wondering how and why that all happened. So...I'm a sucker for this sorta thing. I must be messed up, lol.