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Freudian Slips Cause Problems
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
You should finish this with a happy ending. The Liley world needs more of those from the good writers. Pretty Please?
Jaymes Maxwell
2009-08-26 . chapter 2
One last happy ending chapter? Please? This is killing me, the fact they are both in love with each other but without the guts to admit it. Oh please, make me a happy happy person :)
Lord.Jellyfish
2009-07-24 . chapter 2
How did I miss this?! Man... ah well. Least I could read it now.
I'm depressed... meanie. Beautifully written, though. I loved the flashbacks especially... that last one was so full of unspoken kisses. (I nicked that from somewhere. Point still stands, though.)

Poor Lilly... I shall have to be nice to her now, just to make it up to her. ;P

-Ellejay
freakinacage1234
2009-06-19 . chapter 2
this is really sad :( I think you should do another chapter!
inlovewithMileyCyrus
2009-06-10 . chapter 2
where is that quote from? this is really good. the song is beautiful. it has very deep meaning and i love it.
AlvinFan07
2009-06-06 . chapter 2
Sad :( one more chapter would be cool :) If not, this was really good
IkarusCazadores
2009-05-30 . chapter 2
please put up another chapter and give them a happy ending!
DonH
2009-05-25 . chapter 2
Lilly's POV is exactly what i went through with my best friend lol... she moved to the other side of the world a month later.. Your story hits home for me a lot. amazing writing. I hope miley and lilly can have the happy ending that so many people miss out on.
AllyK00
2009-05-22 . chapter 2
Well i think you ought to continue!! Like you said, everyone loves some sort of a happy ending! And you write the emotion so well. I call for one more chapter!! :)
lita rocks LbC
2009-05-22 . chapter 2
oh man .. that quote hits home. that's me and the person i used to call my best friend. we don't even talk anymore, and the pain is unbearable. sigh*

loved it though .. i really loved it. it's great. awesome. amazing. again, i loved the flashbacks. i hope things turn out well for them!

great job.
lita rocks LbC
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
that was great. i love the little flashbacks and everything. great job.
Nof
2009-05-22 . chapter 2
I think you should do one last chapter..

and just an idea, not one that leaves me feeling completely and utterly depressed.

But that always show skill in writing, which you obviously have.
Janie
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Amazing. You should definetely do a sequel. oh & I loved the song. It was very fitting for the story.
Blood Red Diamond
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
LOVED IT, please let there be more soon. Please!
pattiRISHA
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
THis was sad but great. I hope you add more to it.
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