Glad you've updated.. Not rusty at all. Can't wait to read more :)

This chapter was sweet! Thanks for the update, hope to see more soon! ^_^

I enjoyed this chapter! Funny that I was thinking of my dad only to go online and see this chapter about Lazlo's mother.

But I'm glad Lazlo and Snowe are finally getting serious and, well, physical. That's always a good thing.

Crazy sex with Nay-Kobolds would have been cool too.

Yay, you're alive! I'm glad A&P didn't kill ya!

“You’re not going to do anything weird to my, uhh, hair or anything, right?” Oh, those subtle details... I don't think you're rusty at all!

Lazlo is having some fun at Snowe's expenses, hehehehehe! ^_^ I'm glad you updated.

Oh my hot damn I love it.

And the last paragraph of chapter nine was pure gold.

So funny.

LOVE it.

I have loved this pairing since I bought the game for $15 off a friend.. Okay I was mad at first for the whole ordeal of betrayel and stuff but at the end i couldnt kill Snowe off.. Anywho, you are doing an awesome job in portraying the characters, espcially Snowe. All the right reactions in the right spots. Poor him though, Lazlo is plotting against him..and pink staircases, though I do see Snowe living with one.

Keep it up and I cant wait for the next chapter!

I found your story today and it is awesome! I have laughed so hard with the funny parts. I really like how you mix the comedy and sad parts in it. I actually imagined Lazlo getting drunk just like that, he doesn't struck as a guy who can hold down alcohol. I have added your story to my alerts, hopping that you will update more soon! ^_^

Fantastic story! Can't wait to read the ending.

M... Snowe + collar... *tee hee*

Seriously though, this just keeps getting better :)

I just love your story, how you described the whole thing and characters ^^
I can't wait to read more, I enjoy the way you lead them x3
Anyway, thanks for writting a Suikoden 4 fanfiction (especially a Lazlo x Snowe <3)

"Do you still have that collar?"... Epic win!

I hated Snowe during my first playthrough (after the arm part) until I saw him in that collar. Instant redemption.

Looking forward to the next chapter, as usual. It's nice to read some good, soulbearing conversation from those two.

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in forever; I went on vacation with my family. Let me tell you, it was NOT fun. Washington is not all it's cracked up to be when you have to go with my family. Who!

Anyway, this chapter-of course-was awesome. It gave me a new view of Vincent, and the way you are laying out the plot is FANTASTIC, you've GOT to finish this! UPDATE SOON!

The pink staircase is brilliant! Oh, and "unless you were Aldo and the other guy was Ted"... lmao!!

I love the visuals with this. I almost had an apartment like that over a small boutique shop (slate blue stairs, not pink lol). It closed though & the realtor put the whole building up for sale so I lost the chance.

Ha, well the funny thing is I'm about as drunk as Lazlo right now, reading this (I'll re-read it sober tomorrow, I promise) so that's a plus! Anyway, anything about Snowe's fashion sense is fabulous! I actually met up with a die-hard Suikoden fan friend of mine at the bar and he asked me who my fav, star of destiny was- when I said Snowe he started cracking up. Anyway, I guess my point is, keep going! I won't review this drunk anymore, I promise!