I really like this story, 'cause it's original.
There'll always be the stories about Lois flipping out when she discovers Clark's secret, but I am glad Jason is now something more than just a 2D character, and that he actually has emotions. In most other stories he's just an excuse for Clark to reveal his secret identity, or get in Lois' pants.

wow... seriously, you are a god to me now.

Interesting tale. Looking forward to more.

Ah, wow! this is realy getting good@ yunm yunm

Wow! Blackmailing us in order to get more reviews . . . how Luthorian of you.

Seriously, I can see how Jason got all messed up, and even why, with his inborn ethics, he never told Lois. I can see the knots he'd have gotten tied up in. (Is that a tortured sentence structure, or what?)

It has been an interesting retrospective about how Jason got here. When do we move forward?

Love it! The chapters are full of great detail/character - I just wish they were longer!

I'm so curious to see where this is going!

O. Super ouch. heh heh

Jor-El freezing Lois? Didn't see it coming. I guess it was the last straw.

duhn duhn duhn!

nice! Can;t wait!

LOVE the ending line here! Man, if my Jason inspired this Jason, then I am really flattered! Heavy angst here!

This looks like another "Being Jason White" for me.

Damn. I hope this kid gets straightened out. If not by Doc Goifriend, then by Daddy.

This is about the darkest Jason I've ever read. Wow. He's really... bitter, angry, frustrated... you name it! And Clark Kent is dead? Ok... you've got me. I want more!

brilliant BotH, love your depiction of Jason, such a plausible and interesting direction for him to go in!
please post more! i know you have more to post.

Apparently I added this story to my favorites accidentally when I meant to hit the REVIEW button. It is NOT one of my favorites. Not by a longshot!

First, Lois DOES have siblings. Second, you've written Jason TOTALLY out of character. He would not vilify Superman.

Sounds like you have a few of your own issues to work out, no offense.