it was really funny...and somehow romantic, but mostly funny. good work. ;D

I LOLed. A comic strip would be hilariuos, if you make one, give me the link, okay? Anyways, great story, I love the idea of Roy naming his **. xD

LOL...hahaha...

'Little Roy' :))

“Permission granted BUT PLEASE DO IT WITH MERCY!”

totally laughed out loud there... :))

good (royxriza forever!)

the title and meaning of jai ho is a total misconception though. jai ho means success in hindu. the original hindu of the song means success, the pussycat dolls' version was only used to promote the film and the song to appease the taste of the masses. like every song they used love as a topic. love doesn't have anything to do with jai ho.

just a little info :) do your best in your next fanfic!

Oh gosh, every five moniutes somebody in my class bursts out singing that song~
LOVE the fanfiction, it was really sweet, and 'Little Roy' was hilarious~