 kx54168 2009-11-11 . chapter 4it seems like stuffs just starts to pop out.. |
 kx54168 2009-11-11 . chapter 3confused but it is still a good story!! |
 kx54168 2009-11-11 . chapter 2funny!! |
 kx54168 2009-11-11 . chapter 1awesome! |
 ahvs 2009-07-18 . chapter 6oh nice dream they have...
anyway, some parts is i couldnt visualize and understand... but gud thing u make an alice and wonderland story..
keep posting! |
 hitsuji007 2009-05-28 . chapter 2It's a nice story. Love the plot, but it's too confusing. You should rewrite it. Add a little more detail. Still, nice story. :) |
 Hanisakura 2009-05-24 . chapter 4Interesting..nice chapter.Love it!Keep it up the good work:D |
 iceheartprincess 2009-05-21 . chapter 3hi. nice plot! i got confused on the other parts. Sigh. Anyway, good job. |
 -Angel'sbabyblue- 2009-05-21 . chapter 3Yay, the review button work today XD
finally can review this story =P
Hum, kinda confusing 4 the third chapter,
but it's become more interesting 4 every chapter :)
UPDATE soon!
Ja, Gbu~ |
 Hanisakura 2009-05-21 . chapter 3HI!I read your story and I love it!Very interesting:D
Keep it up the good work..update soon.. |
 jdcocoagirl 2009-05-21 . chapter 3this is funny and more soon. |
 jdcocoagirl 2009-05-20 . chapter 2this is fun to read and i would love to know what will be the out come of this potion to the relationship between miyu and kanata after it wears out or not.. |
 StoryBookDreams 2009-05-19 . chapter 1cute. pretty good for a first=]
the only thing i would suggest is making the chapters a bit longer :]
i look forward to the next chapters! |