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Reviews for: Strawberry juice that was Love Potion
kx54168
2009-11-11 . chapter 4
it seems like stuffs just starts to pop out..
kx54168
2009-11-11 . chapter 3
confused but it is still a good story!!
kx54168
2009-11-11 . chapter 2
funny!!
kx54168
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
awesome!
ahvs
2009-07-18 . chapter 6
oh nice dream they have...
anyway, some parts is i couldnt visualize and understand... but gud thing u make an alice and wonderland story..
keep posting!
hitsuji007
2009-05-28 . chapter 2
It's a nice story. Love the plot, but it's too confusing. You should rewrite it. Add a little more detail. Still, nice story. :)
Hanisakura
2009-05-24 . chapter 4
Interesting..nice chapter.Love it!Keep it up the good work:D
iceheartprincess
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
hi. nice plot! i got confused on the other parts. Sigh. Anyway, good job.
-Angel'sbabyblue-
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
Yay, the review button work today XD
finally can review this story =P

Hum, kinda confusing 4 the third chapter,
but it's become more interesting 4 every chapter :)
UPDATE soon!

Ja, Gbu~
Hanisakura
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
HI!I read your story and I love it!Very interesting:D
Keep it up the good work..update soon..
jdcocoagirl
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
this is funny and more soon.
jdcocoagirl
2009-05-20 . chapter 2
this is fun to read and i would love to know what will be the out come of this potion to the relationship between miyu and kanata after it wears out or not..
StoryBookDreams
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
cute. pretty good for a first=]

the only thing i would suggest is making the chapters a bit longer :]

i look forward to the next chapters!
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