HOMG just plain awesome :D :D sometimes it gets a little repetitive though. but over all, it's great! :)

I rally, really loved it. I felt like you kept everyone in character, everything is also very detailed. I love the plot, definetly original i love the fact that you made Ibiki seem like a fatherly figure. The plot definetly highlights Tenten's strength and Neji's love. Good job, I haven't actually read a fanfic that i felt so strangly about.
You're a fantastic writer. I hope I'll be able to view more stories from you and maybe a possible sequel.
please consider ^^

Holy ** Sais a pervert

that was an amazing story!

This story was incredible, beautifully written and the plot kept me so entertained. I loved every second of it. Simply breath taking...keep up the amazing job!

~Animehostess~

oh my god... this story is absolutley amazing!! i've never in my life read something so beautifully written! And the story... it just leaves me speachless...

Oh wow, at the beginning I thought that you had skipped straight to TenTen getting captured from the hunter's POV, but then when Neji woke up I'm like ":O Oh dang. She tricked me! ...O_O Did she know it was Halloween today?" XD
(Inner: Perhaps, but she didn't know you were going to read this fanfiction today, now did she?)

Hang on... not to be rude, but how do we know she's a she? I mean, her penname may suggest it, but...
(Inner: Let's not anger anyone any further!! ON WITH THE READING!!)

AY AY, I.K.! BYEZZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~wasn't listening to music, but rather fighting with violent thoughts about my ex boyfriend in my head, since he thought it was the PERFECT time to contact me... when I was with my current love >,<~

Ay! ES FENOMENAL! The passion! The JEALOUSY! The SADNESS! THE ROMANCE! THE--
(Inner: THE LOUD SUGAR HIGH MIDGET THAT WON'T STFU!!)

:O... You suck, I.K. Anyway, the emotion is what made me pay attention if the top part wasn't any indication :P I just hope TenTen doesn't get too messed up: Neji wouldn't like that xD
(Inner: 'Course he wouldn't, stop acting stupid. Now we've gotta get the door, more trick or treaters are here!)

BYEZ!!
-Y.K.
(-I.K.)
~HALLOWEEN!~

Why would I hand you a death threat? I'm not capable of anything too... maiming ;D. Besides that, I think this chapter made me smile more than your last one :P
(Inner: ?? Why?)

Because it shows how much they love each other... AND HOW AWESOME TENTEN LOOKS IN A BELLY SHIRT XD
(Inner: *sweatdrops* She never described it, just implied it... Your bi mind is running again, isn't it?)

Hey, you're a part of it too, you might as well enjoy it xP NOW LET'S SEE WHAT NEJI'S GONNA SAY!
BYEZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~reviewed while listening to Who I Am Hates Who I've Been by Reliant K~

;P Sai, that is NOT how you romance a woman--
(Inner: He wasn't trying to romance her, baka! ... XD that is funny though)

GO NEJI, GO! Tell those hollow, decrepit Elders WHO YOUR LADY IS!! YELL IT TO THE WORLD! WHO!! NEJITEN!! WHO!
(Inner: And you told me I was a fangirl...)

BYEZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~reviewed while listening to Waiting by Trapt~

O_O I wouldn't be able to withstand that, you'd have me either unconcious (<--I have no idea how to spell that word, gomen) or dead when that much pain is administered.
(Inner: Or you'd tell them and then they'd kill you anyway XD)

... You're the evil side of me, aren't you?

Anyway, TenTen's.. I guess you could say durability makes me think.. Can humans actually do that?
(Inner: You're sounding kind of dumb right now.)
Whatever...
BYEZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~reviewed while listening to Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace~

:O So sad... They've been separated and TenTen's mission hasn't even began yet!
(Inner: Neji can't deny his clan his presence, duh. He's a servant of the Hyuuga, and that's how it'll be until this fic makes it untrue or Masashi Kishimoto breaks the curse because there's no need to punish the Branch in that way =D)

... You sad, sad fangirl, you... XD Anyway, I liked this one too, I just hope TenTen doesn't hurt herself too bad...
BYEZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~reviewed while listening to Over and Over by Three Days Grace~

Hot damn! EXPLOSIVE first chapter!
(Inner: Honestly, she wasn't expecting much from an author she's never seen before... We definitely underestimated you!)

=D Sorry if that first part was a little... rude, but still, I didn't know what to expect. This is awesome! I'm already drawn in at the point were Tsunade just put her sake down and I'm like "Oh no. What's with the grave pose?" And you're explanation of the whole selection was great too :P Of course she wouldn't choose Ino, Ino's too weak for this kind of mission, not even counting the fact that she's a part of a clan and getting married to Shikamaru (I like ShikaTema a little bit more though, to tell you the truth :3) Sakura's, well... Sakura >.> And sweet Hinata is a no-no, we can't send her.

I'm laughing at myself now, but seriously, great first chapter... I just wanna know what Neji's gonna think about this XD
Review ya next chapter, and thanks for spicing up my Halloween! BYEZ!
-Youkai Koneko
(-I.K.)
~reviewed while listening to In My Place by Coldplay~

Sweet<3

this is soo good!