ohmigod, a hetalia mystery!

those binoculars, in the first chapter, it says switzerland got them as a gift from america, right? so america didnt bring them to switz's house if he was the killer, but that bruise... so many questions! and that hair, too!

also, japan's comment at the end of chapter 2, about how he seems to know that there will be more killings... super chilling! is he involved? are he and america in cahoots? arrgh, must. read. more! you've got me hooked!

usually i'd avoid something like this because of the pairings, but this is really interesting, so i'm definitely going to keep reading. x)

way to be totally graphic, you two. it troubles me that they represent nations and yet they die. no, i'll revive the swiss nature. yeah. swiss cheese

i have trouble believing it's america as you say. it's totally not him! can we make bets? i think it's poland

The binoculars were American, was heavy enough to make Italy scream when it hit his foot, the hair was blond, America had a bruise on his forehead...

I would say America was one of the killers, but that would've been too obvious.

Hm...

very cool continuation...i'm suspecting a japan/america tag team, what with america's bruise and the binoculars, and japan's knowledge of how it all went down, as well as your listing them as a pairing.

speaking of pairings, i do anticipate russia/china just a little. ;D along with whatever else you've got. it's fantastic so far!

*A*

Wow. This is... such a great fic. Love the plot. And I like how good of a detective Italy is in this one. ;D

that was great i like the part with the camera so funny. and the mystery oh who could it be

oh wow, Italy being all smrt and serious really threw mw though a loop

but oh noes! What's up with America? and Whos' gonna die next D

Update whenever! (but son would be nice D)

O_O ALFRED? OMG IT CAN'T BE!maybe someone is trying to incriminate him...makes sense...

Suggestion here:Maybe you should kill Lovino(South Italy)?It would be very interesting, feliciano's reaction and all...

I can't wait for the next chap, pls? If possible, could you update before July? i'm going to travel(Yay! Germany here i go!) and won't be able to use the internet...

Pretty pls?... ó.ò?

KISSUS,

UK-CHAN

PS: Big review is big... XD

O-oh, that chapter was so totally worth waiting for.

Once again, America is an idiot. *shakes head* And yet we love you so, Alfie.

And Axis detectives are just too adorable! But I wonder, why is Germany so nervous? Does he feel he knows who's the culprit, or... *shifty eyes*

Just a little something-something- When you're continuing this story and more Nation-tans die, are you targeting specific people who would immediately be suspected? I wouldn't recommend that.

Uh... let me explain. For example, let's PRETEND Liet is killed. America and the Allies immediately suspect Russia, because everyone will BECOME ONE WITH RUSSIA. *cough* Anyways...

The clues that they find make them suspect him more and more until they find Russia dead one day. At first it's thought of as a suicide out of guilt, but then another series of clues point out that it is someone else, possibly within the Allied group.

...

Um... something like that. Don't kill me please, it's just a suggestion *hides*

oh gosh! you are an amazing writer! i love this story

plz write more i cant wait _

Geez, the evidence is piling up against america.

plus America has tons of crime shows, so he could have easily covered his tracks by watching: CSI, CSI miami, CSI NY, NCIS, Cold Case, Law and Order, Cold Case files, Forensic files, NYPD BLUE, Dr. G medical examiner, The Mentalist, JAG, and much more...he was lying in the Meeting too, but I'm holding out hope that it's not him! I think it's Belarus, or even Liechenstien...perhaps, UPDATE SOON!

Usually anything with FrancexEngland would instantly repell me from a fic...but this is just too good of a mystery fanfiction to give up! You're voice is so excellent, and I adore your detectives (and loved your Switzerland; I'll miss him D8 )!

As for how the mystery is currently shaping up? America just seems too obvious an answer at the moment...so I'm guessing the killer set him up or something along those lines, I think. / :was never particularly good at Clue: ...I blame Canada! He snapped from being ignored for so long, and decided to get revenge by murdering Switzerland and pinning the crime on America! XD

Good work, and keep it up I'm loving this more than I should, considering it revolves around murder...

What the FUCK, America! It was YOU, wasn't it? Do you have an alibi? Huh? HUH?

...XD; I'm getting really into this...and I must admit, I immediately cracked up when I read that Italy had decided to become a detective. I...I just sat there, laughing my head off.

So, is it the 'Axis Powers Detective Agency'? I wouldn't mind it if they came to solve mysteries in my town...

Anyway, please update again soon! This story is made of WIN and AWESOME!

It's rare that I actually like mystery fanfiction..

So, I like our three detectives! As to who the culprit is, there might be enough hints or you are trying to lead us into the wrong direction.. but I was never good with this XD

Anyway, love the chapter :D