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Novalightz
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
Lovely to read. It stats prologue/oneshot. Does that mean it could be made into a story?
Blub
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
you my dear need to write more of this 'crackfic' because it's as good as crack for me right now. Especially curious about how the Azula storyline would go.
WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE.
Dreaming 11
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Aw...that's sweet. Great job as always. :D
Queen of Snow
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
I was hoping for a zutara but the story seems interesting without it. I hope you continue it instead of leaving it as a one-shot!
helloheart
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Aw, the end was so tearjerking. I loved these random (well, they're not really random, but..) drabbles. I loved how you even wove in the Freedom Fighters! It was like traveling all over the Avatarverse. (:

I love the way you write.
MTBlack
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Oh my, oh my, oh my!!
I was checking on my favs since I haven't been round here for QUITE A LONG, LONG TIME! and so I entered in your profile and read Author has 10 stories... and i went on, but then the information hit my neurons and i went back!! ajajja, cause i realized you used to have 9 and all of sudden you had ten! and WOW! OMG! jajaja, such a fantastic story!
I couldn't help but loving it! it's so perfect, it's everywhere, I mean you tell us about every character! it reminded me a lot of RotR!! when you covered all the characters...
i'm so in love with your style! jajaj, i loved it... I especially love how Azula had changed, how Ursa seems to have something for Hakoda, assh,
I even loved the Maiko! it was so... sweet! gosh, i wanted to be Mai! I haven't read an avatar fic since... i dunno, for centuries, i think, and it so great to start again with a fic of yours! (it's like starting all over again, since RotR was the first one i've ever read!)
If you had made a poll, i would have voted for this to be the prologue of some great story! jajaj, i'm imagining all kind of things, stupid things, plots that go nowhere, or end up Zutara! (jaja, i can't help it! :P) but i guess you're not making more chapters,
Anyway, this one was astonishing! So... i'm speechless!! but really happy! thanks for sharing it!
sorry for making the rr so long, jajaj and sorry if you don't understand sth i'm kinda too excited, jajaja
I hope to see you more often :) good luck!
old reader
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
I'm so glad to see you writing for avatar again!! please continue this! I started reading your fics from way back when, and it's amazing to see how much your writing has grown from what was already good to something much better. You have a better flow and grasp of the characters from your early days. Please continue this!!
Inazuma Akai
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Pretty good! : )
Angelfly06
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
this was really good! i especially like that katara goes to visit Jet's death place/grave. the whole story was really well done!
Niana Kuonji
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
Ne, ne! I'll see you there at Fanime! I'm going, too! All packed and everything. If you see a natural red-head walking around as Kenshin and wearing glasses, stop me and say hi!

*blushes* Almost forgot. I liked this, it was cute and bittersweet there at the end. And I can picture the Fire Nation having those exact problems myself.
Ellie
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
I like it! I'm not sure I am getting the "crack" in it, but it looks very good so far. Please continue!
SailorKMoonie
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
aw! that was so sweet! and bravo for keeping it true to the series without any icky Aang and Katara moments. lol
^_^
Leathe
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Very well-written story, I particularly love how each mini-story like, flows in from the one before it. It's always nice to see a post-war fic that isn't all drama and romance.
the statesman
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
I swore I'd never read Avatar fanfic again, but I just can't say "No" to you. So...how's Master Chernobog treating you? ;)
bloomsburry
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
you should make this a post-war fic!it would be great if you continue this!!
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