This is adorable. I love the use of such strong descriptive vocabulary. It's absolutely brilliant.

I loved this! I really like how Hakkai is the one freaking out instead of Gojyo and Gojyo's nonchalance at the whole situation. I can see it easily happening like that too because of the way Hakkai keeps everything so internalized while Gojyo is pretty open about things. As always the way you bring scenes to life is simply amazing.

And as for your update to Ordinary World it wouldn't let me post two reviews for the same chapter so I just wanted to say here that I loved it as well. The clinking of their rings was the perfect touch, and the whole thing left me with the warm fuzzies. Thank you for sharing your talent.

OMG! That's so cute! It's not even fair how adorable this is. 3

I'm terrible at visualization, but I can see this perfectly. And it's so cute! Thanks for the smile.

Oh, how sweet. Although, I always imagined Gojyo had a great singing voice. ;-)

This was really really cute. And so very sweet. Your drabbles are so lovely.

lol sanzo's a pretty pretty pretty princess! XD

(gunshots) _;

Haha. I can't believe I read this after I read the other one you wrote. XD It helped me get past the angst at least. Goku and Jeep are so cute. 3 And Hakkai is just...such a housewife. XDD It's why we all adore him so much.

*falls over laughing* that was a masterpiece of epic proportions!

;; This makes me so sad. But so very happy at the same time. You do a fantastic job of portraying emotions in a very small space. I absolutely adore that about your work. 3

This was so good. I could really feel the depth of Gojyo's feelings and it was such a short chapter too (applauds). Well at least it showed the beginning of deeper feelings. . . love it, love all these drabbles,please keep writing :D

This is lovely. I really like this chapter. It's so...emotive. The language and comparisons and descriptions and juxtapositions...Very well done.

I really like this, especially the end.

This is made of nothing but win. I cannot tell you how much I love this.

I think I'm honestly in love with your short stories. You're inspiring me to do a set of them too.