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i like the idea of Shaggy and Velma playing the ghosts.
i can.. imagine that very good. *imagining* hey, that looks- what's the potato doing there? *stopping-imagining* okay, that was a weird imagination

ehm yeah... anyway, nice update and i like the name of the chapter ;)

Pia

Dolton Brothers? I like the sound of that. It sounds like... shooting?! Okay, that's strange. Maybe I overdid it with the coke. Right here it's 2 o'clock in the morning... so I maybe can't think straight.

Anyway, great chapter and nice to know a bit more of the case. So it's gold this time... aah, all those villains, always the same reasons ...

Pia

Duh, no good, they're in jail.
For some reason, my puberty thinks that's funny, cause I have to laugh uncontrollable. It's hard to write when you have to laugh like me.

Anyway, that was another good chapter (how often have I wrote this now?) and I'm excited to read the whole story...
and can you please make longer chapters?

Pia

can't wait to read more...

please, write fast, it's good!!

Pia

of course, say "food" and shaggy and scooby are ready for everything :D
nice going, keep it on, it's great!

Pia

wooho another story from you! i like your stories. really.
i hope you get enough reviews, so you'll go on writing them...

Pia

p.s. something went wrong on that review to "Scooby Doo where are you". i wanted to say, that Shaggy and Velma are my fave characters and not Shaggy and Scooby. also, i didn't meant god, i meant good, but when i spelled it with more o's than two, my computer made god out of it and i didn't noticed... xD

It was great ive been ive loved scoobydoo my hole life and thats a good story warner bro should hier you as a story writer good job.