That was lovely and moving. It could have stood for a spell-check and/or beta read, but I realize it was written almost three years ago, and looking at your later stuff, it seems like you've cottoned on to that now. But those problems aside, I liked it a lot.

nice. I could hear the very silence in it.

wow. thats really good. It might be cool to do these from other views - Sirius the only one knowing his innocence driven insane... myeh if you don't I might! keep up the good work

Very moving. keep writing.

I like this short story. I think it really captures what Remus would think after what happened. You really have to feel bad for the poor werewolf. Good thing Sirius didn't really betray them; it was only his OTHER best friend. lol. Keep writing!

Ha! Ha! Lani, told ya i'd find u! Thisis really gud v. effective. Ur othastories r wiked 2, keep up the gud work!

thats so sad!

that is sooooo good! It's so sad! I loved it! Beautifully written! Good job! Keep writing!