I adored it. Really.

That ending just made me go 'PFT'

Man you're a good writer, and way to kill the lemonyness, XD

THE EYES WATCHED...

It's the readers' eyes, XD

Nice one, you're good, love it x

Exscellent. Sensual and sexy, but not to literal or vulgar. It feels so right and in character. But what I would rely like to read is a good >what would happen if IT happend< story. You know you're the man to do it...

I enjoyed it, lemons are always good and Kamina getting some is good too lol. But poor Simon, watching his soul-brother having sex with his crush. Still, at least he got to see Yoko nearly naked lol.

...wow

hohohoho
poor boy
tnx for this wonderful fic

M... Love it!! Very well written, and I see its not "complete", so I await reading more!

OMG POOR SIMON

I LOVED IT. I DON'T THINK WORDS CAN DESCRIBE MY HAPPINESS

THANK YOU <3<3<3 I'M SO HAPPY FOR KAMINA FINALLY TAPPING THAT