Very nicely done. Closure is always good. Don't you just wish it was really this easy?

It's been more than a year and I still can't believe she is gone. For most of the time I live in denial, pretending she is just on a business trip or 'retired', and normally I don't read Post-JD stories (although I've written a few myself). But yours caught my attention.

I've always loved Ghost and it is one of a few movies I still cry while watching it. And I have to admit, your story made me cry, too. But I also laughed most of the time.
Jenny's thoughts about Vance are priceless (and somewhere along the way I started to picture Vance with Whoopi Goldberg's hair - don't ask, I have no idea why), Tim's idea of a Jenny-vision ... great!
The end was so touching. Just great!
And I love that you brought back Paula. In the beginning I never liked her, but I was sad when she had to die.
Why do all strong women on NCIS have to die, anyway? So not fair!

To cut a long story short: I really, really liked your story!

Wow. There was so much I loved about this. It was great that Jenny and Gibbs got a chance to say goodbye, they didn't really show how Gibbs dealt with her death on the show.
Paula and Tony! Paula was one of my favourite characters from the very start, I was really sad when she died, and I know that she had feelings for Tony...you did her great justice :)
Got tears in my eyes, and sniffled quite a bit. One of the best stories I have read on here...and I've read alot!
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Very nice, moving story. The last part made me sniffle, just like it happens with "Ghost". :) And I didn't find it sappy at all.

great job! You've done an amazing job of accurately portraying all of the characters. I like how you blended a bit of the movie 'Ghost' (gosh I haven't seen that in forever) with NCIS. keep writing!

aw!
that was a really nice, and sweet story!
good job!

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO GOOD. i cried at the end! you have a billiant knack for writing dude and i cant wait to read what you write next. IM STILL CRYING!
kayleigh
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Stupid idea to listen to "keep breathing" while reading that story, it made me cry. I loved it anyways...

That was the sweetest story that I have ever read on here!! Thank you for writing that. You have a gift.

That was so sweet and sad, it almost made me cry. :)
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Wow! That was really great, and sad. I loved it!

Wow. that was totally amazing! I loved it!

Aw, that was good! I still miss Jenny too. I don't know why they had to kill her off--she is so much better than that jerk Vance.

I have to admit that I hate the film ghost, but I really enjoyed this story. You very nearly made me cry and that takes a lot. I'm really glad you gave Jenny and Gibbs a chance to say goodbye. I always hated that we never saw him deal with losing her in the show and the way things were left between them with so many things unsaid. It didn't hurt that this piece was so well written either lol.
As always great work.

May I have a tissue please? Scratch that...a whole box!