Sorry it's taken me so long to review, but the good news is...I found Jasper! I went back and re-read the whole thing and suddenly he was there and he's perfect! And Emmett is of course a total bad **...you know I love that car and thanks for the shout out in your a/n, you didn't have to do that I'm always happy to help. Can't wait for more!

Awesome chapter Jazz. I love the new one POV at a time it doesn't make me feel so ADD. I'm so happy to see Emmett finally. I can't wait for more of him. I loled at work with "putting her best breast forward" is that her right or left? Can't wait for more.

I just want to say that I'm really enjoying reading this story and I think you are a great writer. Can't wait to read all of it!

I'm lol at Esme & Bella's IMs. I have a friend who's also a writer and we joke about having the longest text messages ever because neither one of us can stand to internet abbreviations. lol Sorry..random thought.

Good job with the chapter, bb! I'm a little creeped out that James had Bella's cell and am intrigued with what he did or is going to do with it. Can't wait for the next chapter! =)

I really like Jasper's POV. I liked how he's thinking of Alice and even twisting her reactions to him over the day. I can't wait to see what he does to get her attention. I also really appreciated the info on Carlisle. I have been wondering about him. I like that he was friends with Emmett. I hope you bring Emmett into it at some point. I can't wait to see what Edward does with the whole DJ thing. I have a picture of him in my head playing something for Bella.
And James is supper creepy. I'm glad Bella is aware of that.
Great chapter.

I loved it!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you for sharing.

Jazz
Great chapter. I really liked BPOV. Like you said, I really got the 'feel' for her in this chapter. I'm still having a hard time getting the 'feel' for Jasper, but I still think that that is more me than it is you or your writing. Your an awesome writer and I'm loving the story. I'm dying for Alice & Bella to finally talk to each other about the boys. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Pinky

Jazz -
I really do like the new format. I like seeing the other POVs of course Edward's is my favorite but that's me. I can't wait to read the new stuff.
Zeph.

Good as always :)
What do Jasper and Edward play in the band?
I love Jasper's POVs the best - you write him very well. The only problem reading his pov is we don't get descriptions of him.
Good job Jazz

Zeph

Oh Jazz I'm sorry this was buried in my inbox and I didn't realize it was still there. I really like the new format of getting the different POVs. i like to know what the other characters are thinking. I could so see Jasper's shirt up. m. nice. i like how you have Rose and Esme in nontraditional roles. Can't wait to read more.

Okay, it took me several tries to find a chapter that I haven't already reviewed. lol

I'm really loving the multiple POVs. To be honest, I wish they were longer and I'm hoping when you get to later chapters that don't have to be rewritten, they will be. Because I'm a greedy ** like that. =)

My one word of caution though, you might want to consider cutting down on the number of POVs that you're writing from. Maybe just do Alice & Jasper, for example. As a reader, I'm loving the viewpoint from all four characters, but that's an awful lot to ask of a writer. It might be easier on you in the long run.

Really, though, I still love your writing. I love Ali's voice in this story and now I'm loving the other voices too. Great job! =)

really good, i was so angry at first when i saw that you had gotten rid of what you had before because i thought you were just getting rid of the entire story but i really like what your doing now. i mean i was fine when it was mainly alice's point of view but having edwards and jaspers really helps too. keep up the awesome writing <3

Ok I think my last review screwed up so lets try this again. I love how you reworked the story. I like knowing what the others are thinking. I also like how you give the times. That really helps. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And I pictured Jackson the whole time.

And now I've read the second chapter, and I must say... you are hilarious. Hands down hilarious. Please keep writing! I love the love.. square? Whatever it is, I'm hooked!

I've only read this first chapter so far, but holy wow, you are a really great writer! I love your style! And I'm already thoroughly enjoying the storyline you're setting up. Keep it up! :-)