this is so sad... but its really good and you should continue it

that was so sad

this is starting out good! keep going!

Actually, between here and us anastasia fans are a big community of friends that can't get enough anastasia. There are plenty more on , , and a few other places. Welcome to the club.

The dialogue could be worked on in the future, also I caught a few grammar mistakes. If you read it over you'd probably be able to tell where you could place some commas or periods. As for the general story, I like the idea. Even though they eloped and most likely would go back to St. Petersburg unless they wanted to be shot, it's still interesting this way. no one has wrote a story like this for Anya and Dimitri so I'm definitely excited about how it turned out. Also, remember not to get too lovey-dovey all the way through. Keep them in character-they are certainly not Romeo and Juliet. Not saying you made it that way, just a look out. I've seen way to many of those.

Also, you should go to . There's a club called To-The-Past. The runner is holding my two contest ideas, you should check out. It's an Anastasia club, so the contests are strictly related to the movie.