Dear Ms. Blondie,

I started your tale based on a recommendation from TippL on Twitter and I'm so glad I did! I just adore EPOV. He lives in his head so getting to read along with his thoughts just makes me giggle.

And although my favorite Bella line belongs to SM "Did you want to do that" my overall favorite is yours..."And yes, I did want to do that part…with my teeth…one button at a time" UNF.

Real life is so busy right now but I can't wait to start Dark Side of the Moon. And to be frank ALL of your many EPOV stories sound wonderful! Given my reaction to this one shot I can tell I'm going to love you and your writing!

Cheers,

Ouiser

ps I will find you on twitter too. m, that sounds ominous but it's not I promise! :)

Just.. wow.

I love it!

I couldn't ask for anything more. Everything I could ever want was in my arms, loving me.

U ARE JUS PERFECT WEN U WRITE FROM ED'S POV

Wow... this is amazing...

Even better then the original I think (sorry Stephenie)...

I actually did cry reading this...

wonderful

Blondie, this is amazing as everything you do. I LOVED dark side of the moon, and as a result I obviously read and recommend everything you write. Thx for this, I wish you'd do the whole book and BD too.

I LOVE IT!

It's great!

Thank you!

wow that's seriously good. I wouldn't of mind if Edward knew what she was thinking but was going like "No, she must not be talking about that. Bella's too innocent for that." But it was incredibly good.

Effing amazing. I can't tell you how perfect and right and true this reads.

Now go finish "Midnight Sun" for us.

'kthankxbyee!

oxxo

Fantastic!

very well done! amazing! :)

thanks so much! I found this nominated for the eddie and bellies. And I'm so glad that I read it. Excellent rendition from Edward's pov. I may have to read Dark Side of the Moon now... :) The best of luck to you and the awards!

And yes, I did want to do that part…with my teeth…one button at a time…

Gah! Yes, please! Best line in the whole thing.

Wow! That was perfect! You really captured both of them! Nicely done!

I love seeing the story from Edward's point of view - and I'm really glad that JAustenlover choose this particular chapter. Poor Edward - so jealous of Jacob and his little present - but he was so sweet when he was rejoicing over her wearing the ring. And the last line (Everything I could ever want was in my arms) - perfect!

Cheers, Paula

Exceptionally well written absolutely wonderful - I thoroughly enjoyed this story - It was also good in the respect that the Eclipse leaked pics are all about this scene too so the imagination went into overdrive! Thank you!