  gv 3/1/12 . chapter 1 that was to easy to predict |
 LianaDare8 4/19/11 . chapter 1Awww! I love DBZ! Especially Gohan and Videl! Their my favorite couples! You did a pretty good job! |
| Anime ADHD 7/2/05 . chapter 1 kawaii how cute! |
| Shi Rurouni of the Aphrodesiac 8/31/03 . chapter 1 AW! That was kawaii! |
| Ranting raving Jess 11/17/02 . chapter 1 Do a sequel to this one or at least another chappie! |
| esteebee 11/16/02 . chapter 1 Awsome! It was GREAT! I can see why kids who never saw DBZ could love 2! |
| silvershelter 9/21/02 . chapter 1 it was a good story and all, but I dont think videl would break down crying. ya know, like maybe shed a few tears and stuff, but no havin a breakdown. and i think it would be kinda cooler if gohan proposed to her privately. but good story! |
| Lovely Moonlight Maiden 5/20/02 . chapter 1 IT'S SO SWEET! PLWESE CONTINUE QUICKLY! |
| Mirai Dude 4/26/02 . chapter 1 Sorta brings a tear to your eye _;.
I loved it but I'm a huge G/V fan so it really isnt saying much. Good work |
| Fire aka kawaiioujoappelsnap 4/4/02 . chapter 1 honk-honk! make though 4 a great story! that was greeeeeeeeeeat! thanks! byE! |
| anime-girl6 3/13/02 . chapter 1 kewl!there old...or im just stupid the second one hehe...i loved it!write more i love your work! |
| MuslimBarbie 3/9/02 . chapter 1 WRITE A SEQEUL PLEASE! YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL! YOU JUST HAVE TO! IF YOU DON'T I'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
| ice elemental 1/27/02 . chapter 1 that was realy good please do more i liked the way they got goten to shut up |
| Raa Estelle 1/25/02 . chapter 1 Good, Good, GOOD! |
| kasbaka 1/23/02 . chapter 1 AWW! that was a great fic! i loved it! great job! |
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