I want more...

Awesome. Pure awesome. Nice bit of humor at the end, too. Made me laugh.

Oh, I gave New California Dreaming a shot-out in my Fallout fanfic Unknown Origins. It's at the end of Chapter 13: Raising the Stakes.

Just read your story for the first time. Great job, and keep up the good work! I wait with baited breath for the next chapter.

Interesting, I like it.

I think this was the first Fallout fanfiction I read,

and if you asked me before I wouldn't have thought that I'd enjoy it so much, so thank you and I certainly hope to see more

of this good stuff.

Update soon? This is still awesome, I'd really like to see the plot keep moving along.

OMG! I loved the story please add another chapter really soon!

o dam i foget to leave a review

cool updats Keep them comeing

mmm cripsy

So I take it that Coyle here is the one that brings back the info on the BoS chapter that Veronica heard about? Or at least I hope, I really do love the Capitol Wasteland chapter BoS. I really do, Lyons just makes it so noble to be sided with them. Also, I await the next chapter patiently.

I want to see coyle's reaction to an actual behemoth. Now that would be cute. I'm glad your not just forgetting dreamers issues and past however, I am looking forward to seeing what you make of the secret enterane to paradise falls, or perhaps other interesting tidbits about it.

Great, an update to my favorite fanfic. That sound is me exhaling; I hadn't realized I'd been holding my breath for the past couple of months. I look forward to each new chapter as if I'm catching up with old friends, now. I complained about Coyle becoming too powerful back in November; consider that concern assuaged. There's nothing more humiliating than having a two-ton supermutant fall on your face. Coyle's injuries were very evocative, too. I winced when I read how his burnt skin peeled away from his armor as he jumped on the Overlord's back. Coyle's no punk, Dirty Harry notwithstanding. Where'd he get a copy of the movie? I can just picture Coyle finding a 200-year-old VCR tape. OK, update soon please.

XCOM...

First: Yay for awesome update!

I try to just sneak around SMO's. They are more trouble than they are worth. I feel for Coyle, that had to suck. Given the height, and massively increased muscle density, I wonder what a SMO must weigh...let alone having it fall on you.

I shudder to see how the Germantown chapter is going to go. Someone's in for a surprise.

Yes! Another excellent update for my favorite Fallout fanfic!

I am glad that you avoid making Coyle into a God Mode Sue by putting him in danger for once. And in his injured state, he will not be able to perform some NCR Ranger-style emancipation on Paradise Falls either. Looking forward on things will go next!

awesome chapter, wish you'd update the xcom or Compelled series though, but shrug, i'll take what i can get :)