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Reviews for: He Screamed
animaluvr3
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Ohmygosh
This is simply amazing. It's wonderfully written, and a great way to explain what happened to Wasp.
I feel so bad for Wasp, and now I just want to cuddle him.
Keep up the good work!
-animaluvr3 aka Paris
MonkeyMindScream
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
I LOVE how you wrote this out...Poor Wasp...Excellent job though. ^^
Ri2
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Holy **.
Well, that explains a lot. Takes one twisted, nutso bugbot to make another, right?
Demyrie
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Wow! You've made me take an interest in Wasp, which was previously impossible. This is a wonderful study, VERY well-written and well-paced. I love the concepts of electric-overload-abusers and all the tech you girded it with. You have a mind for concrete details, which I verymuch appreciate. The last paragraph gave me chills, it was wonderfully rhythmic in that insane way, and the way he just shifted into his new state of mind with the rising buzzing, it was lovely! Like suffocation, but when the person suffocating has no mind to care anymore? I'unno, it was just awesome.

A-plus! I've never seen anything of quality written of Wasp's stockade days until now.
Starfire201
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
I pronounce myself impressed. Explains why he is so unbalanced, that's for sure.
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