 Demyrie 2009-05-20 . chapter 1 Wow! You've made me take an interest in Wasp, which was previously impossible. This is a wonderful study, VERY well-written and well-paced. I love the concepts of electric-overload-abusers and all the tech you girded it with. You have a mind for concrete details, which I verymuch appreciate. The last paragraph gave me chills, it was wonderfully rhythmic in that insane way, and the way he just shifted into his new state of mind with the rising buzzing, it was lovely! Like suffocation, but when the person suffocating has no mind to care anymore? I'unno, it was just awesome.
A-plus! I've never seen anything of quality written of Wasp's stockade days until now. |