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excessivelyperky
2010-01-03 . chapter 86
I wonder what James Potter will do now that Lily has really turned him down? Whatever it is, I suspect that Peter and Sirius will help him do it, and that Remus will try to stay out of it.

I also wonder what happened to Lily? I hope she doesn't get too awfully sick.
Dreamer123
2010-01-03 . chapter 90
This is such a cliffhanger. Please write more soon!
excessivelyperky
2010-01-02 . chapter 85
I know exactly what Lily goes through--my husband signs out for a 'mental health' day the next day, and immediately falls sick, because his body knows he's going to relax.
excessivelyperky
2010-01-01 . chapter 84
Good chapter. I do hope James doesn't think he can impress Lily by pulling 'pranks' on Severus, though.
Riley
2009-12-31 . chapter 90
It's GREAT! Please update it soon!
SisterSafetyPin
2009-12-31 . chapter 70
I agree with Rowena. This story has a really great premise and I really like Theresa, but Severus and Lily are sick in what feels like every single chapter. I mean, it almost seems like on the first day Lily and Sev got sick and haven't got out of bed since. The story isn't developing
excessivelyperky
2009-12-28 . chapter 83
You'd think the fumes from that healing potion he made would have helped, but apparently not--poor Severus! He should have just asked to brew the test potion later.
excessivelyperky
2009-12-27 . chapter 82
Brewing complex potions while sick--bad combination, that. And Remus would have a keen enough sense of smell to figure out that Severus was sick again anyway.
excessivelyperky
2009-12-26 . chapter 81
If Severus went to see Poppy immediately, he might have been well enough on Thursday to learn this new potion--but no...

Anyway, good chapter.
excessivelyperky
2009-12-26 . chapter 80
I can see why Severus doesn't want to play; but at least he isn't a Beater, and wouldn't be forced to send any Bludgers her way. But oh, I think I know what's going to hit him now...
excessivelyperky
2009-12-25 . chapter 79
Good chapter--glad that Severus wasn't permanently injured. Why doesn't he want to be a Seeker?
excessivelyperky
2009-12-24 . chapter 78
Well, it is a good idea for Severus to get more outside exercise, but somehow, I don't think flying around in a thunderstorm is going to be good for him.
Rowanna Llewelyn
2009-12-21 . chapter 90
The story has an ok premise, but the constant bouts of illness for Severus and Lily really put me off. And they seem very OOC. If that was changed, you could have a good story.
excessivelyperky
2009-12-12 . chapter 77
Good chapter--I'm glad they want to help Remus. I hope none of them are hurt or too sick to work on this, though.
excessivelyperky
2009-12-11 . chapter 76
I think Remus will enjoy having friends who don't mind him being a werewolf--and he'll really enjoy not having to shut off his conscience to keep his friends, too.
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