Well done, you've finished it and as Leon said, "All good things must come to an end." Good on you two to go and cheer Leon on to the semifinals/finals.

is there another chapter coming?
this seems like a pretty good ending right now

There's gotta be some rule in the duelist handbook that says one card cannot have all these special abilities. Another comparison for Leon and Ziegfried: When I was watching both their duels for the first time (Technically Ziegfried's second time since the first one was won in one turn), I thought, "They both follow patterns that never seem to end! How the heck is Yugi going to defeat either of them depending on which one wins!?" I'm guessing that there is one, maybe two chapters left.

Leon's cool... except at the beginning of his duel with Yugi, then he was a jerk. I thought we viewers were going to have another bout of mind-control as if we hadn't had enough of that in season 2. I think everybody imagines themselves in their stories AT LEAST once in a while.

No, it’s fine, sometimes I feel like part of a story too, and I know James likes to imagine himself as a character in his favorite stories also.” Kristiann admitted.-couldnt stop laughing for the rest of the chapter

I feel bad for you even though I knew it was coming. I can tell that Ziegfried and Leon are brothers not by the hair color or the last name (even though that's one way) but by their flair for annoyance in their decks with all those obscure special abilities. Probably one of the good things about Leon's deck is that you MIGHT be able to guess what special ability a monster may have if you've read up on your fairytales (and use a bit of imagination).

It kind of reminds of the duel with Joey. (You) are completely clueless to what Ziegfried's deck can really do and you're about to be caught up in a loop. It's kind of weird just how different Leon and Ziegfried are with their decks and yet, they're brothers. By the way, I forgot to mention that you do a good job with writing Ziegfried's heavy German accent.

Wuh-oh. Looks like James (you) got exactly what you wanted. I still think it's unbelievable that Ziegfried won against Rex and Weevil with two of their most powerful monsters in one turn. That was just freakin' awesome when I saw that.

I'm especially interested in the next duel. Write quickly please.

I predict that James is going to win this duel against Fay but then loose to either Ziegfried or Leon (doesn't really matter which one) and same story with Khristiann or however you spell her name unless you're just going way out of wack and changing the ending of the KC Grand Prix completely but it doesn't look like it.

I have to say that I find it a bit weird with your OCs and then throwing Valon into the mix.

You know. I admire you. You've only recieved a total of three reviews out of 21 chapters and yet still you continue on. But did you have to do a rewrite of the KC Grand Prix? I thought that was the most pointless part of the entire anime along with the whole Noah virtual world thing and season 4 with the Orichalcos. But that's just my opinion.

great story. Kaiba hotel couldnt help laughing at that

i am madly in love with this chapter
i couldnt stop laughing :p

james w. alvarez!
you totally stole the phyisical descriptions from your other story
also you know that i would never ever wear shorts to even pick you up from church
lol

altho u totally have your dad down pat when it comes to his attitude towards me