I never and I mean NEVER! had thought about this two doing this! Damn... I guess imagination's the limit in fanfiction I guess...

Wow, that was...hot. I liked how you've kept both in character.

Hiruma you bastard! Promising to be Sena's only! WHY GOD WHY DID YOU ADD THAT ONE LINE?
I am nearly crying, a rough mean NON-gentle Hiruma just chipping away at Sena, breaking him down until there is nothing left, and then trying to be in awe at this idea that popped into your head about Kyouya, I will never look at one of my friends the sane ever again because his nickname/OHSHC Character is Kyouya and everything I will look at him, these images you have now put in my head. Oh my Lord.

P.S Thanks for the end note bit :)

Stupid Hiruma. I know Kyouya's hot, but how could you cheat on Sena? He's better off with Shin!

...damn. THAT was sexy XD

Wow, that was actually pretty damn epic. I like it.