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OutCold
2009-12-14 . chapter 24
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I'm sitting here and my face is literally like that. If my dad turned around... *attempts to close mouth* *fails*
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Oh my god! Alex and Sarah! Wow. Just wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Yay! Wow. Wow.
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Is it possible I'm too attached to your OC? I'm ridiculously happy.
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Okay, I'm going to stop being shocked now. In the review at least. I'm still shocked.

Seriously horrible for Hayes, hope everything turns out okay there.
And I love how Alex calls Cassar 'Nestor', and the whole respect thing you had going on there.
And the virus truly DESTROYED.
Yay.

And now I'm going back to being shocked.
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This is getting pointless... I'm going to stop this review now.

God, I LOVE this fic.

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OutCold
2009-12-14 . chapter 23
Yay, it all went well. How nice. =D

“If they're anything like you Naseem, they surely won't pose much of a threat!,”

That made me laugh so much. Fantastic.

And the Jack/Alex talk. I don't know what it is about those two I love so much, but it's truly fantastic.

Ahh, wonder how that'll work out for the FBI...

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OutCold
2009-12-14 . chapter 22
Horrible feeling that something's going to go wrong here...

Woah, Sackhoff is in deep shit. =D

Jah, the Jack-killing-Nina thing was a difficult moral scenario. And Chase can hope, but your Nina-fixation has never ended, has it? Not that I would ever want it to.

Great chapter.

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OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 21
“I don't, Cassar. Revenge is what caused my sister's death, and I won't perpetuate some sick cycle of vengeance,” Alex spoke, his voice loud and angry.


*sighs*. I just love him.

And they have the virus!! Yay! And I really really should get off the computer now, but I'll read the rest later...


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OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 20
"Although he was tempted, he decided it was best not to reply." Clever Cassar.

I feel sorry for Hodges. :(

And Michael, Xander and George. And you killed Michael!! Meanie. =P

And I even laughed at Alex's terrible joke.

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OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 19
Hm - interesting to have the guy in the van seem reluctant, I wonder where that's going. And to have Alex with a childhood link to Ukraine - okay, I'm going to stop my brain from running off now.

Love the thought that Nina could have been brainwashed, really clever. And if I were Cassar, I'd be scared.

Immensely satisfying, as always, to read the arrest of the traitor. =D

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OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 18
Yay! Go Alex. I love him. I think you've created a character who really should be on the show.
Sucks for Sabir. And Naseem's an idiot but that's a good thing.

Ah! The Cordilla virus scares me so much (worse weapon they've ever had on the show) and now it's STILL out there?

Glad to see Alex finally get out, love this chap.

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OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 17
Okay, so I cheered when Jack shot his other knee. I admit it. I'm a bad person and I'm going to hell. :P Lucky thing I'm not religious, or that might actually be a problem.

But so far as Alex goes - crap. Crap crap crap. I seriously hope they get to him - don't take him to Mexico!

You need to UD...
OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 16
*sigh* You may have guessed before, but I truly LOVE Michelle in the field.
Alex has got to be okay...
At least they got Cassar.

I love the humanity in Josh in that last little paragraph. It was really... I dunno, powerful.
OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 15
Wow, Josh is great at interrogation.
And I told you AK47s weren't it. Yes, I told you about your own fic. ;D
Agh!! More cells. More and more cells.
And a very dangerous weapon...

Poor Kim. Don't blame her for not being over it, and here stuff is happening again...
OutCold
2009-12-13 . chapter 14
Michelle's so brave. =D *mumble-grumble-bloody-kill-good-characters-mutter-grumble*
Yeah, really want to know what Cassar's going to do...
No! Palmer, you're the best president... stupid people with their stupid guilt...

And thank god for that hostage scenario being over.

Great chapter, as per. Reading on.
OutCold
2009-12-11 . chapter 13
Hmm, I'd hate to be the one to break it to Cassar that Alex and Nina are different people...

I think I feel the worst for Sarah. Her job sucks right now, she's dealing with a hostage situation and her friend's in another - just to point out the blindingly obvious.

Don't blame Tariq in the slightest. Extremists give religion such a bad name for something that - not that I'm an expert - is meant to be about peace and love and goodwill.

Palmer's speech is fantastic, I can see him delivering it so well.

There's no way that's the shipment this is all about... I suspect trickery from you.

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OutCold
2009-12-11 . chapter 12
Oh.
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Shit.
Shit.
Shit.
Alex.

I'd leave a longer review, but I have to read on.
It's brilliant.

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OutCold
2009-12-10 . chapter 11
Agh! The happy ending is no longer happy and Cassar's a really really REALLY smart guy.
I love CTU Chicago. Not sure what it us about it, but it's fantastic. Hope they get it all sorter okay...
And Alex and Michelle. Ahh!
Okay, I'm on the edge of my... dog bed that I happen to be sitting on, but let's say seat.
Please UD soon.
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OutCold
2009-12-10 . chapter 10
One happy ending!! Yay!!
And they're on Cassar's trail *tries to tell self it will all turn out fine*
And the revenge talk, perfection.
Really fantastic high adrenalin chap.
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