how sweet <3

When i was reading this, my inner yaoi fangirl-ness emerged.. bwahahaha 8D
anyways loved the story and keep it up

This is quite possibly the most adorable confession I have ever read in any story, fanfic or otherwise ^_^ Giving your breath to others to live... It's so sweet and romantic and beautiful! ^_^
I absolutely loved this fanfic! It was beautifully written, in character and touching. Thank you very much for writing it :)

~BFR

GREAT work!! =D

Oz is so cute here! I love the end of the fic..out of breath...really cute excuse to steal kisses too...and Gil's response at the end...> w < *fangirls*

I love the way you write Gil and Oz... !

Aw, sweetness. I love the concept behind this one -- 's quite cute and meaningful at the same time.

"I’d give my last breath to you, Oz, if it meant you’d live one day longer."

Ahh, a perfect ending, right...there!

The beginning started out a bit slowly, but things picked up quickly enough. This oneshot is quite wonderful overall; I still can't get over just /how/ mischievous Oz can be around poor Gilbert. XD

So I find this awesomely written story, and add it to favorites, and then I suddenly realize... Wait, it's Katraa?! The same awesome Katraa from the Kingdom Hearts fandom?!

Haha, my attention is really outstanding sometimes.

In any case, your writing is as beautiful as always. I could almost feel the same emotions the characters were feeling. And you don't neglect the other characters, which is such a feat!

In any case, I am so, so glad you're in this fandom as well, haha. And right now, I'll just run to read the rest of your stories that I've missed.

Please, don't ever stop writing.

That was really touching. The last sentence was the best! Love it!

Fantastic! So cute and cuddly you had my inner fangirl needing CPR. No joke. Really hit Oz's personality on the head, literally if you happen to be named Alice. Well done!

AW! I'm going to melt into a little puddle of happy goo now:):):) This was wonderful<3
(hi from lj btw:) I would have read this sooner but RL got in the way. I hope you'll have time to do that Alice/Oz/Gil thing at some point<3 )

Th-That.. ;w;

;w;..I think I love you.
That was.. so well written..

You have brought me tears of joy. ;w;

That's... wow.
The first word that came to mind when I read the ending was "Beautiful." That was simply beautiful!

... I'm so glad you've lended your gift for writing to the Pandora Hearts fandom. XD
We needs more stories like this! Especially Oz x Gil! :3

You portray the characters so well! (Something I don't do particularly well D:) But this is very well written, not to mention its about Gill and Oz :3 They need more love.
Can't wait for the next one ^^

Very lovely, I like how you characterized everyone, but most especially Oz.

Ah~! Another wonderful piece. What a treat.
This was absolutely beautiful. I still can't believe how well you capture them and their relationship. They have such a dilemma. Oz feeling as if just days or weeks have passed, while Gil has endured ten years. But the connection is strong, if not a little awkward. The relationship is so beautiful, so different, so complex, and involved and you make it so real in these stories. You make me fall in love with the series, and these two, more and more as I read.
You made this story so poetic, with the gift of breath and such. It was beautiful, and simply cute as well.
I loved reading it, and look forward to more, as always. <3

afdhqkjfhqkjfsd the ending line...
it was god. The kiss scene was very well done, too.
My only crit would be that the constantly switching POVs can be a bit confusing at times.
But still. i'm too busy loving it to care XD