KEEP GOING!

it's me again ;)

I just read this again, and Mo, seriously, just perfect! the first chapter made me cry and the second chapter made me bawl!

"how could I forget?" GUH!

morgan that was amazing.
wowowow


" You can hear her counting faintly, voice trembling with each number. When she gets to five, you say it with her. She turns her head slowly, as if she’s afraid that she will find no one there when she does. And when she sees you, her face crumples with relief and more tears silently fall down her face. Before you know it, she’s got her arms wrapped around you, and you press your nose into her hair, breathing in every little bit of her because you still can’t believe it’s real, and you feel like you need something tangible to hold on to. Cheek presses against cheek, and you hadn’t even realized you were crying, until you felt a drop fall off your nose and into her curls.

You pull away slowly and simply say “you remember” because that’s all that really matters to you now. She smiles widely at your remark, and you brush the hair away from her face. She opens her mouth to speak and the tears begin to fall once more.

“How could I forget?” was all she could mutter, and yet it was all you ever wanted to hear."

thats beautiful! wow mo you're amazing. its all so perfect and so real. i got goosepumps reading it.

Print this out and put it on your wall because damn, this was amazing.

dude! that was just PERFECT! I loved it!! <3 <3

O.M.G.

it's beautiful, morgan, really, really, really, really, really spectacular.
you really captured their essence, their love... will you update it? or is it complete as it is?
i love it. really do
anna

OMG! Yess! I was so scared that they landed in LA, but then when Jack woke up in the island again i was like "woho!" LOL

Great chapter. I'm so happy they're reunited. Loved the Count to 5 moment. It was beautiful.

aw this is really cute
and im liking the s6 idea
keep updating! :]

MORGAN. ! I was almost in tears reading this, and I don't even blame the hour! THAT WAS STUNNING.
one of the best pieces of fic I've been reading for 2 years now I believe.
-- another review follows!

Jack is a bit hard to understand part-no most of the time. He knows what he wants, but there is always something else; some other mission or task to complete. He is tragic...as most LOST characters are, but there is eternal hope that he will get it-get HER in the end.

Very well done, menz815.

Good job lettiong this stand alone. The rest will come soon enough.

awesome start. cant wait to read the rest.

Ella a.k.a Precious ;)

That was an awesome start!
Amazing prologue, i loved it.
I'm looking forward to this fic!

Take care
Oz

woah... really awesome, as in amazing. freaking amazing, girl.

this is great stuff!

Mo, this is absolutely brilliant!

And with that you turn, already struggling with the realization that that will be the last time you will ever touch her.

^killed me...

I can not wait for the rest of it :)

oh, and Snow Patrol FTMFW!