 mmelody6 2010-01-07 . chapter 31:) |
 radiate689 2010-01-07 . chapter 31aw...can't wait for sequel |
 glamourD 2010-01-07 . chapter 31Enjoyed your story and it sounds like you have a great start for a sequel! |
 RubySun03 2010-01-07 . chapter 31Thank you for a wonderful story, i enjoyed it all the way through to the end. It was very interesting, well written and kept me entertained from the beginning. What I liked best though, is your portrayal of Eric and Sookie, and their character development through the story. I really liked how their relationship developed through the course of the story.
I hope you will continue with this, even if it is only occasionally, and I hope to see any new SVM stories from you. You rock! |
 gas 2010-01-07 . chapter 31Ho no you didn't come on this is not faire no not faire at all... we need another chapter please please another chapter... thank you for this magnificent story... Love from Israel, Galit |
 TDTwifan 2010-01-07 . chapter 31I loved that Sookie was finally so honest with Eric in this chapter about how she really felt about getting married and having kids. He was taking really personal before that. That's really sad about Hunter's dad and stepmom, but now Sookie and Eric can raise Hunter like he's their child. Something Sookie thought she could never have. There are many people that can't have children and end up adopting children. The most important thing is that you love your partner. Good story, looking forward to the sequel. |
 Qtlex 2010-01-07 . chapter 31great ending to the story. I'm happy you decided to do a sequel for this! Can't wait to see what you come up with next :-) and I will definitely go on over to read the HP stories. I haven't read those in a really long time! |
 hdgcat 2010-01-06 . chapter 31There were a couple nice details in this chapter: Eric having that b/w pix of her from when he had her investigated when she was seeing Bill. That actually makes sense that he would do that. It also makes sense why he would like that photo.
Giving her a room of her own knowing how independent she is. Considering he's a vamp and when he sleeps etc ,thats not a bad idea. And lots of married couples have them. I love me some pragmatic Eric.
I had issues with the flow of this chapter. Mainly having the "discussion" mixed in with the sex scene was distracting and not fun. JMO. I couldn't enjoy the sex becuz I was trying to follow their conversation and I had trouble following the conversation becz of the sex ..like I said..maybe just me.
You took an easy out with her aging which bums me out a bit. I was really hoping you wouldn't do this. I have yet to see a fanfic writer take the "hard" road of making E/S deal with this issue. And even if Sook lives longer ,looks good,she's still going to age and they didnt' really address it. I'm glad Sook is putting off marrying Eric cuz if she can't ask him the hard questions and demand answers then she has no business marrying him. And Eric has to have dealt with this before ,he's been bonded before and I assume he hasn't Turned every one of them. Maybe he's just afraid to tell her the truth. That 1. he's hoping she'll change her mind about being Turned 2. he doesn't want to admit that eventually he won't want her physically anymore.
While murdering Remy would not have been my first choice , I'm assuming you wanted a quick way to set up your next story,which I will check out btw.
I've enjoyed this story overall. This last chapter just felt rushed ,like you were "over it" and wanted it done. That was the feeling I got ,it just didn't gel with the other chapters , IMO.
I havn't checked out any of your Harry Potter stories although I might one of these days cuz I enjoy HP too. There just isn't enough time in the day.
Good luck and Best Wishes on your new story! |
 jamiedc78 2010-01-06 . chapter 31great story! thank you so very much!
Jamie |
 NorthmanCullen 2010-01-06 . chapter 31Great story and an awesome ending...thank you. I can't wait for the sequel :D As for sequel titles:
1. Not so Dead
2. Dead Family (a play on words from the next book)
3. The Dead Northmans
There kinda lame but maybe it give you an idea for a better title. |
 KricketNorthman 2010-01-06 . chapter 31You know, I'm pretty sure that even CH couldn't give us this satisfying of a chapter. I'm always thrilled when your Eric and Sookie begin a discussion because you write their dialogue so well. It's incredibly heartfelt, revealing, and honest. I love the setup for the sequel and can't wait for Eric's reaction and what Hunter could bring to their relationship. Thanks again for not giving up on this fic and for writing for the Sookieverse. Without a doubt, you're one of the best! |
 HerdFan63 2010-01-06 . chapter 31Looking forward to the sequel!! I think Sookie,Eric,Iain and Pam should raise little Hunter:) What a family! |
 ssloo 2010-01-06 . chapter 31Loved the last chapter! Great ending. I hope Sookie decides to raise Hunter. Can't wait for you to keep going with this...
What about "Not So Dead" or "Dead No More" or something hopeful? |
 jul5857 2010-01-06 . chapter 31What a great way to end the story!
I really DO hope you do a sequel. I'm not sure about the title so I'll have to think about it.
I love how you write the banter between Sookie & Eric!
Thanks for this story -- I have really enjoyed it and look forward to your next one! |
 KYSun 2010-01-06 . chapter 31This has been a great story and have really loved reading it. I hope you do start a sequel with her getting Hunter to raise. It would be an awesome story.. Eric would make a great dad for Hunter. Thanks so much. |