 Mede 2009-05-29 . chapter 1Whoopsy daisy. :) Well, eventually any relationship gets found out, although I wouldn't like to see myself in the paper for it unexpectedly either. Poor Shindou. (And Touya, I suspect...) :) I liked Waya and Isumi's characters and interaction, particularly how well *cough* they took it. ;D Nice use of present tense, too--that can be hard to write without sounding stilted or awkward, but I think you managed. I can't tell though, will there be more chapters or not, since the status doesn't say Complete? I'd say it's easily complete as is, and makes a pretty cute oneshot. Would have been fun to see some of Touya's reactions in there too. :) Overall, good job! |