YAY! Thank you again for a really great little one-shot! Really they seem to be all I need to make a bad moment/day better! Please keep writing!

that was a good movie, star trek, wasnt it...

Very cute. Thanks for sharing. You really have her immaturity down, and I like how he responds to her. I have to wonder how things will change between them as she grows up.

So here I am, reluctant to go to bed and desperately wanting to read fanfiction. I click '"completed" and BOOM! one of your stories appears. I could not miss out on such an opportunity. This was a GREAT story, thanks for sharing your creative outlet!

i'm laughing as i write this, that was so funny! will you continue?

Yay, that was yummy! I know it's a one-shot, but I'd love to see more!
~Loves!~

This is such an adorable story! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE /LOVE/ Jareth in this story! I don't even care that Sarah and Karen were fighting. Seriously! I just want to glomp that man so much! Thunderstorms are most definitely one of the most romantic weather things on the planet! I mean, women can pretend or "pretend" to be scared and then their man can just make them feel all safe and warm and it's all... aww, melt at the adorable cliche.

Before typing up this review I went and discovered that there's an inbox on fanfiction! Show's just how long it's been since I've done anything on here, heh. The limit of characters is 10,0 characters, and that one really long one that I typed up was only about 5,0 or so. might've only been 5,500. So, with that in mind, I wish you luck in filling up an entire review box. When I was sending you all of these reviews I was actually thinking about how sick you must be of seeing this long but named author sending you tons of stuff, but then decided screw it if she's sick of seeing my (egotistcal) ninth grade name (from 4 years ago). If I don't type them out like this then she won't know how I truly feel about all of her wonderful chapters. She'll have to deal with it. So I was obviously thrilled to see that I had brought you so much joy. I, too, enjoy seeing long replies since the people that review me only do that copy and paste of "great chapter, update soon" even if it's a one-shot or completed fic. God those things bug me. If you're going to review, which is wonderful and should always be done, PLEASE make sure that it's not completed or just a oneshot! Sorry, random rage rant that had absolutely nothing to do with this chapter. However, I think that the first paragraph summed up my emotions for it rather nicely and I am out of more praise for its wonderfulness. (oh wow, that's a word) I hope you have fun at your movie! Oh, I don't live near the mountains or ocean either. It's all for a trip, which is fun... but I can never know if someone I adore updates, mainly you... and a wonderful artist on Deviantart who is doing a long butt comic crossover with laby, phantom of the opera, pirates of the Caribbean, Les Miserbles (or however you spell it) Repo, um... and lots and lots of other stuff. Legolas and Sweeney Todd are also in there, but not very often. Mainly Jareth and Phantom. Ek, more ranting! I think I'll just end this now. Night! Have a good weekend and I hope you get to update HMHM II and that Demon one soon. Those two are my all time favorites! Well, I'm sure you can't tell about the second one since I haven't even memorized it's name yet... but still!

that was sweet and cute and humorous =D

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Very interesting to read. Enjoy tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh wow, hey this was really good! Most people have Sarah as a depressed teenager, but in this fic she's actually acting normal! And Jareth's not out of character either. Good job! Made me fan squee

BAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! The end of this story made me snort and start laughing so hard it scared my roommate. Bravo, bravo! This is going on the favourites list, despite the fact Sarah tried to usurp my title of Queen of all things Wicked Cool and Shiny. I shake my fist at her!

very cute story :)
If it rains, could there be a sequel? ;)

That was cute. Is there more to this story?

hehe... this turned out better than I was expecting, given the description... I loved it.
:D
I give it 5 Stars... *