wow pikachu and lutcgo are mon and dad but i think best part is lucario is a girl and also can you make more story please?

So pikachu used the same potion to foil bowser and mewtwo's plan.Glad it worked and pikachu saved lucario.Woah lucario is gonna have a son and pikachu is gonna be a dad.Can't wait for the last chapter.

love it but...

How can lucario get pregnant the same day she... did it and the move is called Arua Storm

Oh no!Mewtwo has lucario this bad very bad.I hope pikachu's plan to rescue her works.

Dude you just made this story a LOT spiceier, but lucario look the same wether they are a boy or a girl. Also how can a lucario get naked? if you think about it it really doesnt make much sense...but who cares the story is awsome.

Lucario and pikachu's relationship has grown deeper now.Loved it when they kept staring lovelingly at each other.So that's what mewtwo's plot is.With him and bowser in the form of lucario and pikachu,They'll get them for sure.Hope mario and link warn can them about the wiked plan.The ending was fantastic when lucario spends the night with pikachu and he sound proofs his room.Update the rest soon.

Neat chapter, SSC. Wow, that was quick. Update soon. I hope Pikachu and Lucario catch on to Mewtwo's plot and stop him.

Lucario and pikachu had great and romantic time.Liked the part when they accidently touched noses with the one strp of spaghetti and when they play with each other on the beach.Good work can't wait for the next what to see what the couple will do next morning.

This is a good story, SSC. Lol, Pikachu accidentally touched Lucario's breasts. Still, good chapter. The whole "spaghetti and meatballs" thing, you got that from the classic romance spaghetti and meatballs that they're eating the same piece of spaghetti until their lips touch. Still, good chapter. Update this and Legend of Crash 3 soon.

That part when falco was in a girls dress and with fake eyelashes was very hillarious! So now pikachu and lucario are off on their date now.With mewtwo shadowing them them there's bound to be real trouble.Great work crash.Can't wait when it shows them on their date.

Funny chapter, SSC. Lol, Falco had to wear a green dress. Falco is going to kill Fox for that. Anyways, good chapter, and nice descriptions. Lol, you did the old "Breathe In and Wait For Someone To Say Breathe Out" joke. Update soon. And SSC, you keep switching between past tense and future tense. Try and keep it in past tense.

Those troublemakers! I thought they would reveal to everyone who she really is! I 'm glad pikachu fixed them good.It's good that master hand is still allowing lucario into the tournament and pikachu and her are going on the date.Whatever mewtwo is planning doesen't sound good at all.Can't wait for the next chapter.

Lol, neat chapter. Oh, Yoshi and Kirby are trouble-makers. I hope you update soon, this is starting to be the great beginning of an even greater story.

...I stopped reading at "huge breasts" part...(...Lucario is dog(okay jackal(which is blue and walks)...)... Have you seen female dogs with breasts.(or Lucarios for that matter...))

Anyway... Why do you always use same characters as villains? Having Mewtwo as generic bad guy starts getting boring... There are so many villain stereo types so you could use something else...(and whats with Impmon being villain in your stories? He was always more of joke villain or trickster...)

Hey, SSC. Nice prologue. Update soon. I also hope you finish DigiPoke Wild West soon, so you can start Legend of Crash Bandicoot 3.