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KShara Khan 6/20/11 . chapter 3
This is a great story but it has been more than 9 years sence your last update, are you ever going to continue with this story?
anon 10/17/06 . chapter 3
Nice start. However, it would be nice if you finnished it.
Twin Tails Speed 6/18/06 . chapter 3
This is a really interesting story.
Katsy17 9/20/05 . chapter 3
sounds pretty good so far :)
Cindy Snowflake 7/18/05 . chapter 3
I wish you'd actually finish some of your earlier fanfictions. This is getting really annoying. Mind if you update this one at some point? You had over three years to write another chapter.
Ravensblack 10/12/04 . chapter 3
Interesting! Did Voldie do it? Or was it something else? Did he follow them? will the Jedi be able to help defeat him? Keep going!
Griff Valdez 6/22/04 . chapter 3
hm. very interesing. i can see how there could be a second acadamy on corosant. maybe its the old one from yodas time? anyway why did you stop writing this? i think its a neat idea.
T.E.N 6/4/04 . chapter 3
CRAP!CRAP!CRAP! NO!NO!NO! Academy NOT on Coruscant it's on Yavin IV (Fourth moon of the gas giant Yavin). Screw ups! Before you continue this read: Jedi Academy Trilogy, Young Jedi Knights, and or Junior Jedi Knights. In the Jedi Academy Trilogy Luke forms the academy, in Young Jedi Knights, Han and Leia's fraternal twin children, Jacen and Jaina, go to the academy and in Junior their youngest kid, Anakin, goes. Oh, and New Jedi Order would probably be good for you too, it's sort of a mixture of Young and Junior Jedi Knights, but it's a while later in time. Sorry, but you don't know enough. And I think that all of these are by Kevin J. Anderson And Rebecca Mosetta (I misspelled her name). If you want to find out for sure then e-mail me.
T.E.N 6/4/04 . chapter 2
Problem. Holochamber? That's more Star Trek than Wars (Holo Deck ring any bells?) and I've never seen or read any in Wars. Also, please don't tell me that Nathan and Kaleb are Padawans, the academy is definitely not on Coruscant. Again, please work on your writing!
Techy El Nerd 6/4/04 . chapter 1
Pretty good, but two things.

1. How thew HELL could Harry develop Force powers by chance? It takes Jedi years to be able to do what he did in moments and they start whern they're tiny little kids. Either change or explain that (and it better be a good explanation!)

2. Yor writings kind of... I don't know, rough. Part of this first chapter read more like a summary than a story.

And for another HP/SW cross then either rearch for the authore Techy El Nerd in Book Crossovers, or Harry Potter, Jedi, Charter Mage, Blackcollar in Book is obvious from the title my story also has a few other... elements.
Danny-DaWriter httpfanfiction.netdannydawriter 2/4/04 . chapter 3
It's been two years since you updated it. We want to see Harry use the Force! Update!
ckk 1/20/04 . chapter 3
its been 2 years since updating i dont even know y i am reviewing but k
Jigglypuff 12/28/02 . chapter 3
MORE plz
Authoress 12/3/02 . chapter 3
"We are in a completely different universe then him you can say his name" LOL! that is so cute! WRITE MORE, I'M DYING OF BOREDOM FROM NOT READING NEW THINGS!
Arianne 11/12/02 . chapter 1
LADY IVE BIN WAITING FOR HALF A DAMN YEAR...I'M DESPERATELY RUNNING OUT OF PATIENCE SO WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 4?
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