its very very gd!

hiya tash, im luvin ur story so much. its amazin, it really had me hoked on. I cant wait 4 another 1 of ur stories.
bye x

tres bon chapter, mon amie. i cant tell you to write more because its finished,but it was good anyway

This is a really good ending! Good twist with his dad getting remarried. If you do get any other ideas definatly write more.

Brillant conclusion, I really enjoyed the twist at the end with his dad having remarried.

You asked about my alevels? Well I had my last exam today so there over! The long wait for results day has begun!

Another great chapter. I hope he makes the right decsion. When will you writ more?

This is really good and don't worry about making the chapters longer as they are good the way they are.

referring to your PM (as you have disabled yours), I don't go to BSG.

He should pick Mr Tom!

I like the length of the cahpters as it makes you want to read more. Why does he trip. ( good luck with your exams!!)

Poor mr Tom! How many chapters do you think you will write?

This is a very good idea and i think you should definatly keep writing until the story end.

This chapter was really good. Have you written anymore storys yet?

Hi guys, thanks for all your reveiws! Sorry all the chapters are really short, they all seem longer on paper!

Good story. very interesting and well written lol. keep writing